~~Aks khusbo hoon, behkarnay say na rokay koi~~

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 10, 2003, 2:18am

Aks khusbo hoon, behkarnay say na rokay koi aur behkar jaoo to mujhe ko na simatay koi

kanp uthte hoon mein yeh souch kay tanhaee mein
meray chehray pe tera naam na pahr kay koi

jis trha khwab meray ho gayay raizay raizay
is trha say na khabhi tot kar behkaray koi

mein to is dun say harasa’n hoon kay jub hokam milay
kohshak pohlon ko kitabo’n mein na rakhay koi

ab to is rah say woh sakhs guzarta bhi nahi
ab kis umeed pe darwazay say jahnkay koi

koi ahat, koi awaz, koi chaap nahi
dil ke galian bare sunsaan hain ayay koi

WiseGuy · November 10, 2003, 2:28am

Nice :k:

AQ · November 10, 2003, 3:10am

ab to is rah say woh sakhs guzarta bhi nahi
ab kis umeed pe darwazay say jahnkay koi

:)

Azad · November 10, 2003, 5:15am

hummm

cuteepie · November 10, 2003, 9:50am

beautiful

thanx for sharing

Sohail_A · November 10, 2003, 11:35am

nice :k:

Amal · November 10, 2003, 11:36am

Re: ~~Aks khusbo hoon, behkarnay say na rokay koi~~

Very nice ghazal kisi ke:k:

Swera · November 10, 2003, 1:43pm

jis trha khwab meray ho gayay raizay raizay
is trha say na khabhi tot kar behkaray koi

wah!

Capricorn · November 10, 2003, 1:48pm

:k:

chand_chehra · November 10, 2003, 2:27pm

Nice :k:

MANAN · November 10, 2003, 5:01pm

wah ji wah:)k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · November 10, 2003, 5:05pm

Buhat khoob GKK :-)

Jaan_Lewaa · November 10, 2003, 7:25pm

bhut achay:k:

ullujii · November 10, 2003, 7:36pm

Re: ~~Aks khusbo hoon, behkarnay say na rokay koi~~

wonderfull

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 29, 2003, 4:06am

thanx everyone:flower1: :k:

aks-e-khushbo · November 29, 2003, 9:38am

love this ghazal.

ASA · November 29, 2003, 9:01pm

Waaah...

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 30, 2003, 12:40am

thanx everyone:flower1: :k:

~*~Aks khusbo hoon, behkarnay say na rokay koi~*~