Girnay Do Tum Mujhay, Mera Saaghar Sambhal Lo
Itna to meray Yaar Karo, MaiN Nashay MaiN HooN.
Ghazab Kiya Teray Waday Pe Aitibaar Kiya.
that is really very nice
Don't u worry Sawera I will be there for you ......
p.s.
;) kehnay main kia herj hay
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*Originally posted by Black Mamba: *
Girnay Do Tum Mujhay, Mera Saaghar Sambhal Lo
Itna to meray Yaar Karo, MaiN Nashay MaiN HooN.
Ghazab Kiya Teray Waday Pe Aitibaar Kiya.
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Na baba aisay nahi ..... Pehlay Saaghar bhar lo laba lub .. baqi fikar not te zikar not :D
Great …:k:
Very nice... Swera Ji...
Kafi dard hai aap ki poem main...
Thank you for sharing...
Aww thats so 
& :k:
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*Originally posted by Azad: *
Na baba aisay nahi ..... Pehlay Saaghar bhar lo laba lub .. baqi fikar not te zikar not :D
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Azad bhai, Khair to hai? Mera Saghar bharwa ke cheen'nay kay baaray maiN to nahiN soch rahai aap? :p
yahaN pay kaab reply milay I never noticed:eek:
abhi jawab deti…
hold on a lil longer:p
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*Originally posted by Black Mamba: *
Girnay Do Tum Mujhay, Mera Saaghar Sambhal Lo
Itna to meray Yaar Karo, MaiN Nashay MaiN HooN.
Ghazab Kiya Teray Waday Pe Aitibaar Kiya.
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Nice shair.....
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*Originally posted by amirbilal: *
that is really very nice
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Thanks..
Thank u…
It’s not that good.
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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
Very nice... Swera Ji...
Kafi dard hai aap ki poem main...
Thank you for sharing...
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Thank u….
Dard hay na….ik dill jo hay…….:p
& u r welcome.:)
Thanks…
Bahut aa’laa …:k:
:k:
oh nice1:k:
Ap nay pehlay bhi bataya tha na:)
Shukriya…
bahut khoob! gr8 !