~Akhri khawahish~

Maheen2002 · November 24, 2004, 1:53pm

mere saathi!
meri yeh rooh, mere jism se parwaaz kar jaaye
tu laut ana
meri be-khawab raatoa’n ke azaaboa’n per
sisaktey shehar mei tum bhi
zara si der ko rukna
mere be-noor hontoa’n ki duaoa’n per
tum apni sard peshaani ka pathar rakh ke ro dena
bus itni baat keh dena
‘‘mujhe tum se muhabbat hai’’

Daagh · November 24, 2004, 2:23pm

maheeno

Maheen2002 · November 24, 2004, 2:33pm

^ kiya hai? :(

system · November 24, 2004, 3:20pm

beautiful :k:

Maheen2002 · November 24, 2004, 3:21pm

Thanks

Nayab · November 24, 2004, 3:23pm

Ohhhh:(

m_kamal · November 24, 2004, 3:56pm

nice 1

chand_chehra · November 24, 2004, 4:52pm

very nice :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · November 24, 2004, 5:42pm

Lovely :k:

Maheen2002 · November 24, 2004, 7:08pm

Thanks HH, Nayab, m kamal and chand_chehra :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 24, 2004, 7:45pm

nice1:k:

Daagh · November 24, 2004, 10:09pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Maheen2002: *
^ kiya hai? :(
[/QUOTE]

itni sad poetry :(

Maheen2002 · November 24, 2004, 10:18pm

i’m feeling sad naa

thanks Ghazal

Aryaan · November 25, 2004, 12:52am

Bohat khoob Maheen..

Golden_Scorpion_1 · November 28, 2004, 5:07am

Buhut Khoob

reet · November 28, 2004, 12:11pm

nice 1…

system · November 29, 2004, 5:07pm

Nice... :(

Maheen2002 · November 29, 2004, 11:20pm

Thanks aryaan, GS, reet & KhamoshNigahein