Akaylay hi aye thay, akaylay hi chalay jaana hai
Dhoond kar sabb ko, khud hi kaheen kho jaana hai
Nazr tou subb may khush bohut atein hain
Dil hai diya aansoo ka, hountoun nay muskraye jaana hai
Raangou may jeetein hain, rangoun ki duniya may
Bayrung iss rooh ko, rang-e- mousam nay kar jaana hai
Na kar khayal-e-zikr kissi ka aur abb phir
Tourr kar tujhay, aasman par bakhair jaana hai
Kiyoun baha diye aankh kay motti youn meray doost
Yaqeenan Rabb ki zaat say haath bhara hi lay kar jaana hai
Re: akaylay hi aye thay...
thankyou so much golden scorpion:)
Fareeshta nahee houn....
another ghazal of mine.....:)
Fareeshta nahee, ghalati hum say ho sakti hai
Zindah houn Aaj, par kal mout ho sakti hai **
**Qasoor nahee mera, keh mehsoos nahee kuch
Dard ko najanay aur kiya dard ho sakti hai **
*Akalay may jo hum safar par chal diye youn... *
*Maloom thaa kiya subha may shaam ho sakti hai *
*Maanglo ubb phir jo maangna hai appnay rabb say tasha...(thats my name) *
**Waqt ki kiya khabr, kaheen qabool-e-dua’ ho sakti hai:)
Re: akaylay hi aye thay…
Very Nice… Tasha :k:
If its Your own Poetery Post it in Shora-e-GS … (Poet 2)
Re: akaylay hi aye thay…
yea i wrote these ghazals…ill post from now on poet 2!
Re: akaylay hi aye thay...
My first ever thread/post on GS :D
Re: akaylay hi aye thay...
The first one is really nice.
Re: akaylay hi aye thay...
What happened after that, cafe consumed you. :D
Re: akaylay hi aye thay…
actually cafe constructed me :roman:
Re: Fareeshta nahee houn....
this is a great poem, EMM.
beautiful thought.
thanks for sharing.
dushwari
another ghazal of mine.....:) Fareeshta nahee, ghalati hum say ho sakti hai Zindah houn Aaj, par kal mout ho sakti hai ** **Qasoor nahee mera, keh mehsoos nahee kuch Dard ko najanay aur kiya dard ho sakti hai ** *Akalay may jo hum safar par chal diye youn... * *Maloom thaa kiya subha may shaam ho sakti hai * *Maanglo ubb phir jo maangna hai appnay rabb say tasha...(thats my name) * **Waqt ki kiya khabr, kaheen qabool-e-dua’ ho sakti hai:)
Re: akaylay hi aye thay…
^ thanx Dushi ji
its been more than a yr since I have written anything .. damn medicine 
Re: akaylay hi aye thay…
Well, itna bura to nahi likhte aap 
Thanx for brining it back Evilmastermind 
Aur koi taaza kalaam mil jaey to aur baat ho
Re: akaylay hi aye thay…
may be, EMM should be a moderator of this forum too now :k:
nice sharing. let me do some post mortem.
Re: Fareeshta nahee houn....
*Dard ko najanay aur kiya dard ho sakti hai *
dard is a masculine word in proper urdu. dard ho saktaa hai, ho naheeN saktee...
"ho sakti" ghalat-ul-aam maiN istemaal hotaa hai, it's wrong usage of the gender.
use "takleef" to maintain the "zameen"....
Re: akaylay hi aye thay…
Buhat Khub:k:
Re: Fareeshta nahee houn…
Ehsan Bhai note this 
ahahahah goodone!
good suggestions - yea my urdu suxxx 
thanx
thanx everyon
Re: akaylay hi aye thay...
EMM,
thanks for sharing, really nice poem.
imagery is so powerful as is the choice of words.
best,
Dushwari
Re: akaylay hi aye thay...
Akaylay hi aye thay, akaylay hi chalay jaana hai
hummm aap ke mariz itnay khush naseeb nahi hain. aap se pehlay aap ke bohut saray marizon nay jana hay.