Ak Shair....!!!!

tum_bin_1 · September 26, 2007, 3:34pm

Ajeeb chup thee fizaa main sawaal honay tak
Phir us kay baad main roya nedhaal honay tak

bheegiyaad · September 26, 2007, 3:35pm

Re: Ak Shair....!!!!

nice:)

SJ · September 26, 2007, 3:36pm

Re: Ak Shair....!!!!

bohat dukhee hai..........
magar ...........acha hai:)

tum_bin_1 · September 26, 2007, 3:38pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

Dukhee insaan nay jo likha hai

SJ · September 26, 2007, 3:39pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

konsay insaan nay???

tum_bin_1 · September 26, 2007, 3:41pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

pata nahi

but abhi to main nay likha hai

Shab-e-Hijar · September 26, 2007, 3:41pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

awww

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 26, 2007, 3:43pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

ap ne me ko tease kia tah nah

SJ · September 26, 2007, 3:43pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

phir ye kaisay kaha dukhe insaan nay likha hai???

SJ · September 26, 2007, 3:44pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

tum_bin_1 · September 26, 2007, 3:44pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

haan shayad

Prince_Ali · September 26, 2007, 4:08pm

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**aray likha nahi type kiya hai! choti choti cheezen samjhani parhti hein

waise bohut dukhi shair hai **

tum_bin_1 · September 26, 2007, 4:17pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

Thank you

Prince_Ali · September 26, 2007, 4:22pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

itna dukhi to bechara woh likhne wala bhi nahi hua ho ga jitna aap ho rahin hein, hosla rakhen

tum_bin_1 · September 26, 2007, 4:28pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

zabt kay toot ga’ay aaj to bandhan saray
aaj tarpa hai wo dil, jo kabhi dharka na tha

Prince_Ali · September 26, 2007, 4:31pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

**wah kya baat hai

waise yeh shair mujhe pehle wale shair se bhi acha laga hai

**

tum_bin_1 · September 26, 2007, 4:36pm

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

thanks 4 liking it

Prince_Ali · September 26, 2007, 4:40pm

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**ab to rona band karen

jo hua so hua, mitti payen :)**

tum_bin_1 · September 27, 2007, 11:56am

Re: Ak Shair…!!!

Thanks

sunny_nicky · September 27, 2007, 11:57am

Re: Ak Shair....!!!!

very nicee