ajnabi shahr ke ajnabi rastay

Gemini_the_Great · January 20, 2002, 3:04am

***ajnabi shahr ke ajnabi rastay,meri tanhai pe muskratay rahay main boht dare tak yunhi chalta raha,tum boht dare tak yaad atay rahay

zahr milta raha, zahr petay rahay,roze martay rahay roze jeetay rahay
zindagi bhi hamain azmati rahi,aur ham bhi isay azmatay rahay

zakhm jab bhi koi zehn-o dill per laga,zindagi ki tarf aik dareecha khula
ham bhi goya kisi saz ke tar hain,chot khatay rahay aour gunguntay rahay

kal kuch aisa howa main boht thak gaya,is liya sun ke bhi unsuni kar gaya
kitni yadon ke bhatakay howay karwan dill ke zakhmon ke dar khatkatay rahay***

…Anonymous

As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what matters. – Seneca

ASA · January 20, 2002, 5:15pm

nice GTG

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Shaam-e-Firaq · January 20, 2002, 6:40pm

bery bery guddddddd g t g

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“Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today”

Capricorn · January 20, 2002, 7:50pm

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Originally posted by Gemini the Great:

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ham bhi goya kisi saz ke tar hain,chot khatay rahay aour gunguntay rahay

....Anonymous

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Its beautiful Gem......resembles that one "Mujhe haadison ne saja saja ke buhat haseen bana diya hai"

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chand_chehra · January 20, 2002, 8:00pm

beautiful one sona

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Akif_zeb_1 · January 20, 2002, 9:07pm

very nice .. well iss kay baray main koe naien janta thaa phir iss ko jaab gaya gaya to us kay baad iss ko fame milla it is written by the salman alvi's chacha.. and salman alvi sang it..

mairay dill mairay mussafir

KinaRa · January 20, 2002, 10:07pm

bohat chanGi jee

per aiy daso tusi chalday keo ray..koe rakhsa teXi kaarwa lainday na

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Sehar · January 20, 2002, 10:55pm

sigh

Thanks GtG

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Amal · January 21, 2002, 12:23am

bohat hi nice GTG

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

Zakhmi_Umar · January 21, 2002, 6:48am

Buhat Khoob Bari Aachi Posting Hai Keep it up and Shukriya for sharing

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Samad · January 21, 2002, 10:29am

yummy yum yum
bari hi tasty or mazay ki ghazal thi

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thanx 4 sharing…

Lamhay · January 21, 2002, 3:38pm

ajnabi shahr ke ajnabi rastay,meri tanhai pe muskratay rahay
main boht dare tak yunhi chalta raha,tum boht dare tak yaad atay rahay!

Nice one Gtgbehna!

apni hasti ko mita kar log aksar
dosroon ko sanwaar jate hain
baaz auqaat maslehat ke tehat
jeetne wale bhi haar jate hain!

Pramod · January 21, 2002, 4:34pm

kal kuch aisa howa main boht thak gaya,is liya sun ke bhi unsuni kar gaya
kitni yadon ke bhatakay howay karwan dill ke zakhmon ke dar khatkatay rahay

It is just Great as Gemini the Great...

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

juMurA · January 21, 2002, 5:43pm

GTG bohaat khoob. very good choice . reminds me of old times.

*** kABhI KAy DiN lAmBaY / KaBHi KeY RaAtiAN *
Oscar Wilde**

Gemini_the_Great · January 21, 2002, 5:50pm

Thanks AsSweetAs….S-e-F…Capri….CC…..KinaRa…Sehar….Amal Bhai….ZU….ASN….JuMurA…Lamhay…pramod for liking

Akif Bhai Thanku very much for sharing the poet name

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As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what matters. – Seneca

jasmeen · January 23, 2002, 3:40am

excellent gimini, its a very beautiful ghazal.

lafzoon ko itamad ka lahja bhi chahey
zikrey saher baja hay yaqeeney saher bhi chahaey

Khanzada · January 23, 2002, 5:20pm

Beautiful!

Kambakht Ishq!

Farwa · January 24, 2002, 4:06am

very nice

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MASSTT · January 24, 2002, 5:03am

kitni yadon ke bhatakay howay karwan dill ke zakhmon ke dar khatkatay rahay

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mnsiw · November 28, 2006, 7:00am

Re: ajnabi shahr ke ajnabi rastay

For your kind information this poem is written by Rahi Masoom Raza, and originally sang by Ashok Khosla, that original version is 100 times better than this Salman Alavi one.