Ajnabi Khoof..............

tum_bin_1 · August 12, 2007, 1:27pm

Ajanabi Khauf fizaaon mein basaa ho jaisey
Shehr kaa shehr hii aaseb_zadaa ho jaisey

Raat ke pichley pehar aatii hain aawaazein si
Duur saharaa mein koi cheeKh rahaa ho jaisey

Dar-o-deewaar pe chhaai hai udaasii aisi
Aaj har ghar se janaza-saa utha ho jaisey

Muskurata huN pa-e-Khaatir-e-ahabaab magar
Dukh to chehre ki lakiiron pe saja ho jaisey

Ab agar Doob gayaa bhi to maruuN gaa na ‘Kamaal’
Behtay paani pe meraa naam likhaa ho jaise

Prince_Ali · August 12, 2007, 1:33pm

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great poem by Abdullah Kamaal:k:
thanx for sharin’ tum bin.

SJ · August 12, 2007, 2:53pm

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Ajanabi Khauf fizaaon mein basaa ho jaisey
Shehr kaa shehr hii aaseb_zadaa ho jaisey

Zabardust Shair....
:)

Sheal · August 12, 2007, 3:26pm

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bohot khoob :k:

deep_ocean · August 12, 2007, 3:50pm

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buhat khoob

Amal · August 12, 2007, 3:56pm

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stunningly superb :k:

babri · August 12, 2007, 5:35pm

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bohat ala.

Shab-e-Hijar · August 12, 2007, 7:05pm

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raat kay sehra mai koi cheekh raha ho jasay :hinna:

beautiful sharing sis

_Masoom_Muskaan · August 12, 2007, 7:28pm

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nice:)

being_lonely · August 12, 2007, 9:05pm

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Likha Ho Jaisay Wah Khoobsurat Ghazal Tum Bin khush rahiye Amin !

tum_bin_1 · August 13, 2007, 12:09pm

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thanks

tum_bin_1 · August 13, 2007, 12:10pm

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shukria

tum_bin_1 · August 14, 2007, 6:25pm

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Thanks deep ocen, shab-e-hijar, Amal, being lonely, MM,sevenstar
:)

redidentity · August 15, 2007, 6:03am

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Beautiful..