Ajj Kithhe Saaddi Yaad Aa Gaee...!

Zamil · March 19, 2006, 9:12am

GHAZAL

Kithhe c jadon asi ishq vich jindrri noon barbaad kar lea !
Ajj kithhe saaddi yaad aa gaee! ajj kithhon saanoon yaad kar lea !

Hunn j mom v hoya toon te ki hoya, barri deir ho gaee !
Asi te hunn akhh pathhar kar laee, seene noon faulaad kar lea !

Jaabar waqt ne mohraa(n) laaiyaa(n) jadon diyaa(n) enhaa(n)
bulliyaa(n) ute !
Therrkan d asi waaz bana laee, sahwaa(n) noon faryaad kar lea !

Asi kataabaa(n) kholde reh gaye saadda kuj na bannya yaaro !
O loki ustaad c jenhaa(n) wele noon ustaad kar lea !
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(poet: Zamil)
[RIGHT](written in Dec’2003)[/RIGHT]

Prince_Ali · March 19, 2006, 9:08pm

Re: Ajj Kithhe Saaddi Yaad Aa Gaee…!

:k:

LambarDarnii · March 19, 2006, 10:15pm

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AOA guysss

SuPErrbBBBBBBBBBBB zabardasssttt zamilllll sahabb tussi qamaal ker dittaa:phati:

system · March 20, 2006, 10:35am

Re: Ajj Kithhe Saaddi Yaad Aa Gaee...!

"Assi tey huNn akh patthar kar leyi, seeney nu faulaad kar leya!"

Bahut khoob likha hai... :-)

HeArT_HaCKeR · March 20, 2006, 10:42am

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someone plz translate it in urdu

system · March 20, 2006, 12:41pm

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^ I could do it for you HH.. lekin Zamil ki ghazal ka sateyanaas ho jaaye ga.. The rhythm disappears when translated to urdu..

HeArT_HaCKeR · March 20, 2006, 4:34pm

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:(

HeArT_HaCKeR · March 20, 2006, 4:35pm

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koii baat nahii.. baghair rhythm k bhii chalay gii :D

Zamil · March 20, 2006, 8:43pm

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PA, LD, KN !
Bohat nawaazish, Bohat shukria!

Zamil · March 20, 2006, 8:52pm

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HH !
Aap k liye translate ki hai.

AND,

KN !
Let me know if the rhythm is disturbed:blush:. You know me afterall…

Kahan they tum jab ishq mein main ne jeevan ko barbaad kar lia
Aaj kahan meri yaad aa gaee, ab kaise mujhe yaad kar lia

Ab jo mom bhi ho gaye tum to kya haasil, barri deir ho gaee
Main ne aankh ko pathhar kar k seene ko faulaad kar lia

Jaabir waqt ne mohr laga di jab se mere in honton par
Dharrkan ki aawaaz bana li, saanson ko faryaad kar lia

Ham to kitaabein kholte reh gaye, kuch bhi na ban saka hamaara
Wohi huey ustaad jinhon ne waqt ko hi ustaad kar lia

NikamiJano · March 20, 2006, 9:05pm

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punjabi version is better..:k:

Zamil · March 20, 2006, 9:16pm

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Or kya NJ. Orignal to phir orignal hi hoti hai.
Bas ye HH hain na…

HeArT_HaCKeR · March 20, 2006, 9:27pm

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errr maybe punjabi ver better ho lekin mujhe tu urdu mein hee samajh ayee nd i luvd it … i tried to read in punjabi again lekin mae aur punjabi

Zamil: thx for translating it. naraz na hooye afterall i’m ur ‘fan’

Zamil · March 20, 2006, 9:38pm

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Arey nahi bhaee, naraaz kaun hai bhala !!!
8-]

HeArT_HaCKeR · March 20, 2006, 10:15pm

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yew

chalo_ab_faisla_kar_lo · March 28, 2006, 7:40pm

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hmmmmmmmmm:k: :k:

Zamil · April 3, 2006, 10:50pm

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Bohat shukria CAFKL !!! :-)

ASA · April 21, 2006, 5:13am

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wah kya kehne... bouhat he khoob...

Asi kataabaaN kholde reh gaye sadda kuj na bannya yaaro !
O loki ustaad c jenhaaN wele noon ustaad kar lea !

P_G · April 21, 2006, 8:10am

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ki shayree aay
tusee tay mehfil lut lee

Zamil · April 21, 2006, 10:14pm

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*Barri Nawaazish Bohat shukria Janab !:) *

Ajj Kithhe Saaddi Yaad Aa Gaee...!

KN ! Let me know if the rhythm is disturbed:blush:. You know me afterall…

KN !
Let me know if the rhythm is disturbed:blush:. You know me afterall…