Ajeeb shaks tha haathoon main haath!

Lamhay · July 2, 2003, 6:05pm

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Ajeeb shaks tha haathoon mein haath chorh gaya,
woh do kaddam hi chala tha ke saath chor gaya,
unkey naam ki nizbath se keh gaya sab kuch,
Meri zubaan pe magar aapni baath chor gaya,
zameen ka bojh merey sar par aah gaya jaisay,
woh easi paow thalae kainaat chorh gaya,
woh aftaab ka sooraj tha meri duniya mein,
Gaya to sarey zamaane mein raat chor gaya!**

Amarbail1 · July 2, 2003, 6:11pm

Beautiful … :k:

kkkashifff · July 2, 2003, 6:46pm

*** achi shairi ka aik namoona.. wah ji wah ***

Philanthrope · July 2, 2003, 7:38pm

So Lovely!

Amarbail1 · July 2, 2003, 7:42pm

Juda huwe tu judai mein yeh kamaal bhi thaa
Ke us se raabta toota bhi thaa bahaal bhi thaa
Woh jaane wala humein kis tarah bhulaayega
Hamaare paish-e-nazar aik sawaal yeh bhi thaa
Yeh ab jo dekh rahe ho yeh kuch naya tu nahee
Yeh zindagi ka tamaasha guzishta saal bhi thaa
Yeh daagh likha thaa sailaab ke muqaddar mein
Mera makaan tu pehle se khasta haal bhi thaa

guybrush · July 2, 2003, 7:45pm

goodie :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 2, 2003, 7:51pm

bohat khoob lamhay ji :)

umeed24 · July 2, 2003, 8:55pm

wonderful:k:

system · July 2, 2003, 9:28pm

Great… Lamhay & Amarbail

XkanwalX · July 3, 2003, 2:16am

WAH!!.. :k:

Lamhay sis.. nice selection..

Amarbail1 · July 3, 2003, 5:53am

Thanks KN and Kanwal for liking my contribution in this thread...

Sorry Lamhay, I posted without asking ya ...

Lamhay · July 3, 2003, 9:38am

thanks AB , philantrope, Guybrush, xkanwal , umeed24,HH , kashif, khamosh niaghien,

Lamhay · July 3, 2003, 9:40am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amarbail: *

Juda huwe tu judai mein yeh kamaal bhi thaa
Ke us se raabta toota bhi thaa bahaal bhi thaa
Woh jaane wala humein kis tarah bhulaayega
Hamaare paish-e-nazar aik sawaal yeh bhi thaa
Yeh ab jo dekh rahe ho yeh kuch naya tu nahee
Yeh zindagi ka tamaasha guzishta saal bhi thaa
Yeh daagh likha thaa sailaab ke muqaddar mein
Mera makaan tu pehle se khasta haal bhi thaa

[/QUOTE]

Wah!

Lamhay · July 3, 2003, 9:42am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amarbail: *
Thanks KN and Kanwal for liking my contribution in this thread...

Sorry Lamhay, I posted without asking ya ...
[/QUOTE]

its ok! aj tak pocha ......

Amarbail1 · July 3, 2003, 10:49am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *

its ok! aj tak pocha ......
[/QUOTE]

Ji .... Nahee ....

ASA · July 3, 2003, 2:52pm

Jabrdast… bouhat hee Aala… :k:

Paglee · July 3, 2003, 7:47pm

Re: Ajeeb shaks tha haathoon main haath!

:k:

jasmeen · July 4, 2003, 7:55pm

bohtt achyy lamhy jee:flower1:
or kia baat hay Amerbel boht khoob reply hay app ka:k: