Aisa Lagta hai Zindagi Tum ho

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

terray_naam June 19, 2009, 4:47pm 1

***Aisa lagta hai zindagi tum ho
ajnabi jaise ajnabi tum ho

*** ab koi arzoo nahin baaki
justaju meri aakhri tum ho

*** main zamin par ghana andhera hun
asmanon ki chandni tum ho

*** doston se vafaa ki ummeden
kis zamaane ke aadmi tum ho ***

Shab-e-Hijar June 19, 2009, 4:55pm 2

Lovely :)

saqijani June 19, 2009, 6:34pm 3

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one the best...ever green..waah

Ahmi June 20, 2009, 4:24am 4

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Last shair is a bitter reality....thanks for sharing...

Sri Lanka v South Africa 2013

being_lonely June 20, 2009, 7:28am 5

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Cute flow in ghazal umda sharing T.naam :k:

terray_naam June 20, 2009, 2:46pm 6

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Thanx all jee

Starlight June 20, 2009, 2:51pm 7

buhat umda. sweet as rusgulla.

errrghh...Aawara Bhanvra..

redidentity June 20, 2009, 3:43pm 8

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buhat khoob.. :)

Dhusmanu sey Muhabbat??

sanadubai June 28, 2009, 9:30pm 9

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**doston se vafaa ki ummeden
kis zamaane ke aadmi tum ho **
nice 1

Aryaan June 28, 2009, 10:11pm 10

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Bohat khoob Tere_Naam...

terray_naam June 29, 2009, 2:34pm 11

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shukria

Muslim_girl_1 July 9, 2009, 1:57am 12

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nice n short…:k:

Wht r u doing ?

Wht r u doing ?

hiba_no.1 July 9, 2009, 2:01pm 13

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***doston se vafaa ki ummeden
kis zamaane ke aadmi tum ho ***

:k:

terray_naam July 9, 2009, 2:59pm 14

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Thanx all

Dua_G July 9, 2009, 10:32pm 15

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bohat khoob

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