*aisa kyon hota hai
hum jis ko chahtay hain
vo aur kisi aur ko chahta hai
aur vo jis ko chahata hai
vo kisi aur ko chahti hai
lakin is baat ka andazz
nahin aata hai k log
unnay kyon chahtay hain
jo unko nahin chahtay hain. *
Note: Inspired by a poem of Dushwari
at this site with the same title.
i mean the issue you presented as an inspiration piece.
aside. her poem seems more like a sad disillusionment with whoever she wrote it for. she , if i am not mistaken, is feeling heavily burdened by the thought that whoever she offered her hand derogated that woefully.
your poem, in contrast is dealing with triangles.
nonetheless, both true and both are inspiring.
cheers!