Aik sher

“DhuaaN bana kay fiza maiN uRa diya mujh ko
MaiN jul raha tha,kisee nay bhuja diya mujh ko…”

Nice,Thanks for sharing !

you should have posted the full ghazal..everything is beautiful:k:

one of my favs :slight_smile: :k:

very nice....

can i have the full version pls Dhoop ji? :)

who is it by?

*sighs → :teary1:

Nazeer Barqi sahab ki is ghazal ka eik eik sher .. mujhey mera aina sa lagta hey :frowning:

**dhuaaN banaake fizaa main uraah diyaa mujhko ..
main jal rahaa tha kisi ne bujhaa diyaa mujhko ..

taraqqiyon ka fasaanaa sunaa diyaa mujhko ..
abhi haNsaa bhi na thaa, aur rulaa diyaa mujhko ..

main eik zarraa bulandi ko chhuune niklaa tha ..
hawaa ne tham key zameen par giraa diyaa mujhko ..

safed sung ki chaadar lapeT kar mujh par ..
faseel-e-shahar pe kisne sajaa diyaa mujhko ..

khaDa hooN aaj bhi, roTi ke chaar harf liye ..
sawaal ye hai, kitaabon ne kyaa diyaa mujhko ..

na jaane kaun saa jazbaa thaa jisne Khud hi “Nazeer” ..
meri hi zaat kaa dushman banaa diyaa mujhko .. :teary1:**

PS: ----> :crying:

PS2: —> kesi hoo dhoop ??? :~)

nice dhoop:)

Buhat khoobsurat hai :k:

Re: Aik sher

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*Originally posted by Dhoop: *
"DhuaaN bana kay fiza maiN uRa diya mujh ko
MaiN jul raha tha,kisee nay bhuja diya mujh ko....."
[/QUOTE]

bhoooooooooooooot khooooooooob

thanks everyone for liking this sher......
Azam bhai aap farmaiyay aap kaisay hain?
main Alhumdollillah bilkul theek hoon.

wow…beautiful ghazal:k:

indeed buhat khobsurat ghazal hai main nai apnee diary main likh bhi li :)

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*Originally posted by Guest7777: *
indeed buhat khobsurat ghazal hai main nai apnee diary main likh bhi li :)
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i agree with u but ap ki daiery kahan hia...;)

main abhi taak theek to nahi howa .. magar zinda hoon :smiley:

yaar post karti raha karo .. tumhaari number of posts dekh kar to mujhey tumpar nikamii honey ka shaq sa hoo raha he :hoonh: :smiley:

:smokin:

zabardast .. good choice :k:

bhoot achay :k:

yup zabardast:k: :k:

Zabardast !

Ay shamma hum dil jaloon se tere naseeb achay hain
Tu ek shab jali hum barsoon se jal rahe hain !!!

beautiful :slight_smile:

yeah one of my favs !