Aik Sher..

redidentity · April 25, 2009, 3:21pm

Qadam Ruk Se Gaye Hain Phool Biktay Dekh Ker Darshan
Main Aksar Uss Se Kehta Tha Muhabbat Phool Hoti Hai

fayax · April 25, 2009, 3:26pm

Re: Aik Sher..

Vah Vah. Apna sheir hay Kya ?

redidentity · April 26, 2009, 8:04am

Re: Aik Sher..

nahi fayax not mine :)

thanks :)

S.786 · April 26, 2009, 8:43am

Re: Aik Sher..

VERY NICE JNAB

FairyTale · April 26, 2009, 9:58am

Re: Aik Sher..

one from me too...

Yeh tumhari talakh nawaaziyan koi aur seh kar tou dikhaaey.
Yeh jo Hum mein aur Tum mein nibaah hai, Meray hoslaay ka kamaal hai... :D

FairyTale · April 26, 2009, 10:00am

yes Red.. i liked this shair... Mein Pal do pal ka shair hoon.. kiya baat hai iss ki. This is the one you posted here right ? ;)

redidentity · April 26, 2009, 12:59pm

Re: Aik Sher..

:)

thanks FT, for tareef n contribution :)

Daanie · April 28, 2009, 10:21am

Re: Aik Sher..

buhut khoob :)

redidentity · April 28, 2009, 11:18am

Re: Aik Sher..

thank you Daanie :)

abeeha · April 30, 2009, 11:00am

Re: Aik Sher..

o how nice.....

redidentity · April 30, 2009, 11:09am

Re: Aik Sher..

thanks abeeha :)

FairyTale · May 3, 2009, 7:18pm

Re: Aik Sher..

Chaltay Chaltay thak kar paaon ne kaha dill se.....

Bari durr banaiee hai manzil dill mein rehnay waalon ne ...

sighs.

redidentity · May 5, 2009, 4:27am

Re: Aik Sher..

nice nice..

nyla_n · May 9, 2009, 12:42pm

Re: Aik Sher..

veryyyyyyyyyyy nice