Aik sher

tahreem_saeed · September 26, 2007, 8:28am

Main Zindage k Raste Main chup Chap Bikhar Jata,
Agar ik Roz b Apni Tanhai Say Dar Jata,
Kal Samnay Manzil Thee our Pechy us ke Awaz,
Rukta to Safar Jata Chalta to Bichar jata

being_lonely · September 26, 2007, 2:29pm

Re: Aik sher

Chalta To Bichar Jaata Baarha Parha Hua Par Har Baar Apna He Aik Luft Hai Parhnay Ka Thanks Tahreem For Sharing

SunnyBoy · September 26, 2007, 2:57pm

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:k:

being_lonely · September 26, 2007, 3:00pm

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Zinda Hon Main Iss Tarah Say Ke Zindagi Nahi..
Jalta Hoa Diya Hon Magar Roshanii Nahiii

bheegiyaad · September 26, 2007, 3:38pm

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nice:)

tahreem_saeed · September 27, 2007, 8:51am

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nice sid thanks bheegi yaad sunny boy
Youn haste huay chhalak jati hai aankhain meri
Kitna haseen dhang hai mere muskurane ka

sameenji · September 27, 2007, 9:01am

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nice..

Ab kyon udaas beethe ho sardiyon ki shaamo main
is tarhan to hota hai is tarhan k kaamoo main...

i like it...(im not sure ...per aasa hi kuch hai):)

tahreem_saeed · September 27, 2007, 9:08am

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super sameen ji i like it too

Dushwari · September 27, 2007, 9:35am

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Tahreem Saeed,

these are beautiful lines.
thanks for sharing.

best,

Dushwari

tahreem_saeed · September 27, 2007, 9:40am

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thanks Dushwari jii so nice of u

arsalanh2000 · September 27, 2007, 9:40am

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Buhut Khoob.... :) everyone has exclussive choice ... thanks for sharing

Its mine Favourite:

Mana Ke Ab Ke Shayad Tabiyet Badal Gayee
Kaisay Kahien Ke Uss Ki Mohabbat Badal Gayee

Bay Sakhta Charagh Ko Mainay Bujha Diya!!!
Tareekiyoon Se Meri Adawat Badal Gayee

tahreem_saeed · September 27, 2007, 9:42am

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thanks Arsalan and ur choice is superb tooo

immu · September 27, 2007, 9:52am

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Chaho to hamko dil se mita dena
Chaho to hamko bhula dena
Par ye wada karo k aaye jo kabhi yad hamari
Rona mat, Sirf MUSKRA dena

tahreem_saeed · September 27, 2007, 9:55am

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superb immu bahi

immu · September 27, 2007, 9:59am

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Thank U janab

sunny_nicky · September 27, 2007, 11:11am

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nicee

tahreem_saeed · September 27, 2007, 2:49pm

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thanks sunny

taliba2007 · September 27, 2007, 6:59pm

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wow very nice. thanks 4 sharing.

m.a.d.i.h.a · September 28, 2007, 3:54pm

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it's beautiful...

Amal · September 28, 2007, 4:06pm

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Very nice tahreem :k: