Aik Sher..

redidentity · July 19, 2007, 5:46pm

Aik Sher..

Uryaaniaan To Barhti He Jaati Hain Sheher Main
Inn Ka Ilaaj Koi Magar Sochta Nahi..

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Pasand Aye Ga..

Regards,

Amal · July 19, 2007, 6:03pm

Re: Aik Sher..

^ Aap ke zehan meiN koi “Ilaaj” aata hey?

rkopra · July 19, 2007, 6:15pm

Re: Aik Sher..

aankhon pe pattiian bandh lo jaldi say
agar jahanuum main nahin jaana hai

Note: Amal, I hope this isn't a warning provoking post. Delete it, if it is.

Amal · July 19, 2007, 6:49pm

Re: Aik Sher..

^ nahi ye nahi hey...Thanx for listening to me by the way :)

redidentity · July 20, 2007, 4:36am

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Meri Umrr Bhar Ki Thi Wo Daastaan Jisay Tum Hansi Main Uraa gaye..

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 20, 2007, 12:44pm

Re: Aik Sher..

ilaaj mein batati hoon thora intezaar karo:p

rkopra · July 20, 2007, 2:18pm

Re: Aik Sher..

jis intazaar main mareez mar jaata hai
vo intzaar kyaa hai
hakeem ki jaldi se talash hai

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 20, 2007, 3:14pm

Re: Aik Sher..

^ aap ney sheir nahi parha , yahan koi mareez nahi mar raha:-)

goodnews · August 9, 2007, 1:24am

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Azad · August 16, 2007, 11:01am

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hummm taank jhank woh bhi shehir bhar mein... enlightened moderation ki hud hay.

SJ · August 16, 2007, 11:40am

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App ko oposition ki tarhan har baat pay aitraz hai bhai.................:D

Azad · August 21, 2007, 5:21pm

Re: Aik Sher..

yani zoor kiss par howa “aitraz” par… hummm humaray kahaya’lat kitnay milte jul’te hein.

SJ · August 21, 2007, 5:44pm

Re: Aik Sher..

han na…
har baat par aitraz nahin kartay bhai…buree baat hotee hai…:halo:
chalain ab tu sulah ho gae:hugz:

Azad · August 21, 2007, 6:18pm

Re: Aik Sher..

hummm bhai nahi karte honge hum to karte

SJ · August 21, 2007, 6:19pm

Re: Aik Sher..

wel app bhi bhai he ho hamaray…

Azad · August 21, 2007, 6:25pm

Re: Aik Sher..

hummm

ramyssysIX · August 23, 2007, 8:30pm

Re: Aik Sher..

Ahmer, nice theme. I have made a gustakhi of correcting the sheir. Ab keisa lag reha hei?

Beipardagee barhtee chalee jaatee hei shehr mei
In ka ilaaj koeeee bhee magar sochta naheen

ya phir...

Beipardagee kee moj huee kisqadar baland!
Band is kei saamnei koee kioon baandhta naheen?

Waisey, kia uryaanyaan aik valid lafz hei?

redidentity · August 24, 2007, 4:41am

Re: Aik Sher..

2nd onelooks good.. :)

jee Uryanian is a valid word.. n i wanted that word in it.. :$

btw thnx for ur corrections :)

appreciated