-- Aik Sheir --

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Muaalij is qadar mayoos mujhsey ho geya
Zakhm merey namak sey dhoh geyaa

[Koyal]

Re: -- Aik Sheir --

nice sher gul :)

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: – Aik Sheir –

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

Muaalij is qadar mayoos mujhsey ho geya
Zakhm merey namak sey dhoh geyaa

acha

oopsss sowey

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: – Aik Sheir –

Ouch!!!

wasy mualij ko mai muj parh rahi thi

[muddii]

Re: -- Aik Sheir --

Muaalij is qadar mayoos mujhsey ho geya Zakhm merey namak sey dhoh geyaa

Foreign change the muaalij:)

[Dushwari]

Re: -- Aik Sheir --

Gul-e-tasbeeh,

aisa sheire kyoon?

[Samad]

Re: -- Aik Sheir --

hmmm kaafi namak bhara sher hai, thori cheeni daalni paray gi.

[SunnyBoy]

Re: – Aik Sheir –

[redidentity]

Re: -- Aik Sheir --

very nice :)

[Amal]

Re: – Aik Sheir –

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

Muaalij is qadar mayoos mujhsey ho geya
Zakhm merey namak sey dhoh geyaa

Bohat hi na’hanjaar tha … wesey aap case kar sakti heiN us ke khilaaf Criminal Negligence, Endangering Life ya Professional Incompetency ka Wesey aap to ye legalities hum sey bethar jaanti heiN :~)

[Bholay_Bisray]

Re: -- Aik Sheir --

sub loog huns kion rahay Gul kay shair pur?

zakum aur wo bhi dil kay zukhm :) , German Muaalij hay na, might be "wady sahib" kay saath kaam kurta raha ho :D

Was there any thread opened jiss main Gul ko welcome back kaha giya ho? i think i missed it. so welcome Gul, hope you feeling better! :)

[Prince_Ali]

Re: -- Aik Sheir --

bohut khub Gul! dil ki baat zubaan tak aa gayi :)