Aik shair

Wo mere is qadar kareeb hua
Us se milna na phir naseeb hua

Re: Aik shair

boht umda :lajawab:

itne huwe qareeb ke hum door hogae

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Aisa kyon ?

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Chitra Singh at her best!

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Mile to poochoon :)

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Qareeb hua ....theek...dil k qareeb...
but milna na naseeb honay k wajah qareeb hona kaise hai ? :(

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Btw :welcome: bk to poetry capricorn

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kabhi kabhi paas aane se ranjishen badh jati hain

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thora distance rakhna chahye tha :khumar:

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Ranjish ? Doori you mean ?

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:no: its good to be close

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narazgi

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Wo biklul aise jaise kisee ne kaha: Itne hue qareeb ke hum door ho gaye. If you can understand this, you may understand the shair I have quoted :-)

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Thank you. Aate jaate rahna chahiye :slight_smile:
But, very kind of you to greet me.

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:no: I dont get it…door kyon ho jatay hain loog ?
Chote chote maslon k wajah se ? Ya dil bhar jata hai ?

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Ana zyadah chahiye :D

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Narazgi se itna zyadah door ?

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paas aake admi ek doosre per khulte hain. achaiyon ke sath buraiyan bhi nazar aane lagti hain. aur agar buraiyan hazam na hon to qurbaten faslon main badal jati hain

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Kitna?

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Haye! Aflatoon ko bulana parega! Hum kahan aise ke is ko bayan kar sakein!