Aik Shair

[being_lonely]

Asalam u Alaikum !
So Here Is One Shair Of Mine Hope You Like It

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Mein Ne Kaha Apni Nazar Utaar Lijiye Ga
Muskura Kar Rakh Diya Meri Gardan Pe Khanjar

BeInG lonelY !!! sID !!!

[NikamiJano]

Re: Aik Shair

v nice sharing BL keep it up...try to complete puri gazal :)

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: Aik Shair

bari qatil haseena thi koi

[m.a.d.i.h.a]

Re: Aik Shair

very nice

[being_lonely]

Re: Aik Shair

Thanks Nj shab n madiha

[chacha_Ghalib]

Re: Aik Shair

@Shab-e-Hijar

bari qatil haseena thi koi

aap ko kaisy pata kay haseena thi :aq:

lonely unkal its nice

[being_lonely]

Re: Aik Shair

Thanks CG :)

[Azad]

Re: Aik Shair

hummm

[Sannan]

Re: Aik Shair

Mein Ne Kaha Apni Nazar Utaar Lijiye Ga
Muskura Kar Rakh Diya Meri Gardan Pe Khanjar

Bhai SID ghalti ho gai aap ka undoh naak she'r parh kar ..... bara truckoon wala she'r likh mara hay janab nay ......

Ma'zarat kay sath aap kay she'r key perody kar raha hoon .....

Mein Ne Kaha Apni Nazar Utaar Lijiye Ga
Muskara Kay Bolay "Tum Naheen Ho Kia Meray Sath"

[goodnews]

Re: Aik Shair

Kehna tha nazar utarny ko kaha hy Balli charhany ko nahi:D
**PS: Nazar ky liy kala teeka lagya jata hai **

[being_lonely]

Re: Aik Shair

Ab Ye to haseena par munhasir hai na woh nazar kaisay utaarti hai !

@ sannan sohbat ka asar hai jo aisa sher likh daala haseenayen majboor karti hain aaisa kuch likhany par :p