Zindage Kay Damaan Mein Raat Ki Sayahee Hai
Uff Meray Muqadar Mein Kis Qadar Tabahee Hai
Re: Aik shair..............
very nice :)
tabahee ko tanhaee say replace kar do
Re: Aik shair…
aray yaar tanhaee kay maray hoay nain hain …qismat ki tabahee ka shikar hain:teary2:
Re: Aik shair…
ganday bachay, aisay nahi sochtay.. Allah miaan gunaah detay hain..
wese buhat acha sher hai.. 
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Re: Aik shair..............
wese na mera bhi aik sher hai.. mujhe achanak wo yaad agaya..
Dukh, Dard, Saaniha, Gham-o-Zakhm, Haadisa
Kia Kuch Nahi Dia Hai Hum Ko Hayaat Nay
(Ahmer)
Re: Aik shair..............
wese na mera bhi aik sher hai.. mujhe achanak wo yaad agaya..
Dukh, Dard, Saaniha, Gham-o-Zakhm, Haadisa Kia Kuch Nahi Dia Hai Hum Ko Hayaat Nay
(Ahmer)
awesome shair hai Ahmer...........
buss yun he likh diya tha mein nay tou.........
Re: Aik shair..............
Zindage Kay Damaan Mein Raat Ki Sayahee Hai Uff Meray Muqadar Mein Kis Qadar Tabahee Hai
mein jiss say milta hoon wo mugh say rooth jata hai
maray mahboob nay hi ki maree jag rasayee hai
chahoon mein bhi aagar is ko badnaam kar doon magar
khuda nay maree tabiyat aaysee nahi banayee hai
takleef jo is ko ho mein phoot kay roo parta hoon
jallan hai apnee jaga, aur ye bhi ek sachchaee hai
jab jazb-e-ishq utha too mughay maloom na tha
kay samandar-e-ishq nay kitnee kishteyan dobayee hai
sonia jee kuch shair add kiyay hain ....................koyee jawab nahi hai plz dont mind.........
Re: Aik shair…
thank you…
Re: Aik shair…
Kool :k:
Re: Aik shair..............
wese na mera bhi aik sher hai.. mujhe achanak wo yaad agaya..
Dukh, Dard, Saaniha, Gham-o-Zakhm, Haadisa Kia Kuch Nahi Dia Hai Hum Ko Hayaat Nay
(Ahmer)
Very Nice :(
Re: Aik shair..............
itna udaas shair :(
kya huwa??
Re: Aik shair…
buss shab sis…
dukhee aatmaa hain…
kahan tak sunoo gee…kahan tak sunainn:teary2:
Re: Aik shair…
dear.. aapka sher mujhe to buhat acha laga.. mainay buri baat iss leay kaha tha k aise laga k na’shukri ho rahee hai na.. wo bhi Ramzan main 
mujhe batao k kia hua hai ?? chupke se..