aik sha'er

chacha_Ghalib · September 28, 2007, 4:38pm

jor-o-jafaa-e-yaar say dil chaak ho gaya
gharoor-e-hasti sub mera bas khaak ho gaya

full ghazal to come in the next few days

AQ · September 30, 2007, 6:53pm

Re: aik sha’er

waiting for the full ghazal… seems pretty promising :k:

Azad · October 1, 2007, 2:31pm

Re: aik sha'er

khoob, jab khaak hi hona hay to 'bas' ka kia karna

redidentity · October 2, 2007, 4:07am

Re: aik sha’er

Buhat khoob.. :k:

chacha_Ghalib · October 2, 2007, 2:14pm

Re: aik sha'er

thanx guys...

and azad unkal 'bas' wazan kay liye hai

Azad · October 2, 2007, 2:43pm

Re: aik sha'er

aap ko buss pasand hay to aap buss main chalay jain.

Shab-e-Hijar · October 2, 2007, 7:11pm

Re: aik sha’er

hawaye asa kyu hogya