aik qitta......for some1 special:)

SJ · September 12, 2007, 7:34am

khizaa’n rut ki udaasee mujh pay taree kar gaya hai

mujh pay wo maree har saans bharee kar gaya hai

mein rozz lartee hon,mein rozz he haar jatee hon

meray ander woo kaisee jung jaree kar gaya hai

wel likhe tu aik "special doost"k liay the…bt sharing wid u all…do tell me kaisaa laga ye qitta:)

redidentity · September 12, 2007, 7:40am

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as usual dear.. buhat zabardast flow.. n simply awesome..

keep it up

Shab-e-Hijar · September 12, 2007, 7:46am

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ahh what a killer qita very nice sonia g

keep it up:flower1:

SJ · September 12, 2007, 7:50am

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thanks shabbo…

SJ · September 12, 2007, 7:50am

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thanks Ahmer…app hamesha mujhay encourage kartay ho:)

Prince_Ali · September 12, 2007, 8:30am

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meray ander woo kaisee jung jaree kar gaya hai

**wah! kafi gehra matlab nikatla hai

buhut khub **

SJ · September 12, 2007, 10:46am

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thanks Prince…

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 12, 2007, 2:36pm

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ache he hoge

chacha_Ghalib · September 12, 2007, 4:00pm

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bohat khoob...

doosra shair to bohat umda hai

Omar_Faraz · September 12, 2007, 4:14pm

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He's gone and I
am as sad as fall
He's gone and I
now breath hard

Now I fight daily
and lose daily
What a war he
started inside me

mirage · September 12, 2007, 4:16pm

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beautiful. sonia u sound like a genuine poetess. nice to meet you :)

SJ · September 12, 2007, 4:21pm

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thanks Miraje:)

fizatiq · September 12, 2007, 4:40pm

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wow...buhat khoob.......

fizatiq · September 12, 2007, 5:01pm

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jiss baat ko sunnay ki hasrat thee barsoon say
wo batain wo mugh say saree kar gaya hai

loog kehtay hain mugh say main sab kuch bhool jata hoon
yeah kaisee wo mugh mein bemaree kar gaya hai

tammana,khuaish arzoo jaisay sab gayeein hoon pouree
bus yadoon ka silsila wo jaree kar gaya hai
by fizatiq ....hope u guys like it........

being_lonely · September 13, 2007, 1:40am

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MashALLAH umda likhti haIn aap ! Meri Tawaqo Se Kahin Acha khush rahiye

khaaS doSt to mEin tha
ghadaari na kaabil e maafi jurm

glamorous · September 13, 2007, 1:44am

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wow amazing

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 13, 2007, 7:29am

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Aap ney hum sab k saath share kar k buhat acha kiya warna hum log itni khoobsurat tehreer sey mehroom reh jaatey jo keh aapki sarasar naa-inssafi hoti:-) aap Mashallah buhat hi khoobsurat likti heiN, yoonhi likhti rehiye aur share karna nahi bhooliye ga:-)

deep_ocean · September 13, 2007, 8:20am

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beautiful , it is just amazing

SJ · September 13, 2007, 2:03pm

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ab nahin bholon ge kabhi bhi:)…

Sheal · September 13, 2007, 4:32pm

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share kernay ka shukria . mashallah bohot khoob likha hai :K: