Aik Qata..

redidentity · September 19, 2007, 8:54am

Aik Qata..

Apnon Se Dil Ki Baat Kahay Aur Apna Dukh Bhi Bat’laye
Khush Wohi To Rehta Hai, Sukh Wohi To Paye
Per Jo Apne Aise Hon, Jo Apne Hoker Na Apne Hon
To Dukh Uska Phir Aur Barhay, Ruswa Wo Ho Jaye

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Pasand Aye Ga..

Regards,

SJ · September 19, 2007, 8:58am

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wah Ahmer Wah..............
meray sath bant liya karo na apnay dukh.........:)

redidentity · September 19, 2007, 9:09am

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so sweet..

thnx

SJ · September 19, 2007, 9:18am

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koi baat nahin.................:)

arsalanh2000 · September 19, 2007, 9:19am

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Nice one, Ahmer....

Ap to achay khaasay Shayir ho gaiay hein, Good practice ...

redidentity · September 19, 2007, 9:40am

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thnx arsalan :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 19, 2007, 10:12am

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Nice one:-)

AQ · September 19, 2007, 10:30am

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saheeh baat hai :k:

Samad · September 19, 2007, 10:51am

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I think I have read this in Akhbar-e-Jahan

SJ · September 19, 2007, 11:45am

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^LOL

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 19, 2007, 1:00pm

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aap Akhbar-e-jahan ki bijaaey koi aur risala paRhna shuru kar deiN

chacha_Ghalib · September 19, 2007, 7:22pm

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shaeiri ki bajay nasar lagti hai

waisy bhai ruswaai waali baat samajh main nahin aai

redidentity · September 20, 2007, 4:38am

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Thnx Gul n Anwaar Ji :)

@ ARNOLD.. Lagta hai aap jahaan bhar se saari poems collect ker k uss ka akhbaar banatay ho.. usay aap akbaar-e-jahan kehtay ho :D

@ Ghalib Jee.. Sir actually ye meri aap-beeti hai, ruswai ka sense ajeeb sa hai magar true hai.. wo suna haina.. uss sheher main mujh se pehle meray afsanay gaye.. :) isay hum shohrat bhi keh saktay hain aur badnaami bhi :)