Aik Qata..

redidentity · September 6, 2007, 10:36am

Aik Qata..

Aitbaar Kerna Hai
Intezar Kerna Hai
Duur Duur Reh Ker Bhi
Hum Ko Pyaar Kerna Hai

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Pasand Aye Ga..

Regards,

Aliyish · September 6, 2007, 10:44am

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Aj kaal zaraaa karkiii hai
kia udhaaar karna hai ?

good work Ahmer !

SJ · September 6, 2007, 2:23pm

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sirf pasand nahin …bohat pasand aayaa hai Ahmer…
great work:k:
keep sharing…waiting for new stuff:hugz:

AQ · September 6, 2007, 7:37pm

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simple and amazing :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 6, 2007, 8:06pm

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aitbaar ka kia mean he uncle :)

redidentity · September 7, 2007, 4:09am

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Thnx aliyish :)

redidentity · September 7, 2007, 4:10am

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Hey Siss Thnx alot I love the way U appreciate.. mera kitna sara khoon barh jaata hai

redidentity · September 7, 2007, 4:11am

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Promise Karain?

Shuu.. aapko pasand aaya.. Thanks alot AQ Jee..

redidentity · September 7, 2007, 4:11am

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Aitbaar = Believe :)

SJ · September 7, 2007, 9:43am

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Aitbaar…

hmm…Jo mujhay tum par aur tumhain mujh par hai…

Aee samajh:confused:

SJ · September 7, 2007, 10:13am

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ohoo …tu pehlay batatay na…meiin aur zayada tareef kar daytee…so that zayada sa khoon barh jataa…

waisay jokes apart…app bohat acha likhtay ho…
its always a pleasure to read u…

redidentity · September 7, 2007, 10:16am

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ager aur khoon barhta.. to pooling hojati..

Thnx alot.. i will try k dobara likhna shuru ker doon.. magar shayad ye sab kuch khud se hojata hai.. kabhi effort nahi kerna parta..

SJ · September 7, 2007, 10:20am

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its a good thing k app ko effort nahin karni partee…jo maza be-sakhtagee mein hai…wo aur kisi mein nahin…dil say likhe hoe baat dil ko lagtee hai…
n i m impressed k app dil say likhtay ho:)

redidentity · September 7, 2007, 10:35am

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tthnx..

take good care of urself.. Allah hafiz..

remember.. keep smiling

tum_bin_1 · September 7, 2007, 6:59pm

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soooooo cute :halo:

redidentity · September 10, 2007, 6:41am

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Thnx tum_bin :)

Dilsay · September 10, 2007, 12:52pm

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Bohat acha hai... Khush rahoo

redidentity · September 10, 2007, 1:04pm

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Than You dilsay :)

Amal · September 10, 2007, 1:20pm

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Very hi nice Ahmer :k: Simple but impressive…looks like it could become a song

Omar_Faraz · September 10, 2007, 3:14pm

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I agree with Amal. It sounds more like the lines from a movie song than a stanza of some poem.

Perhaps you can expand it using words like mohabbat, dil, aankhain, palkain, chera, bahar, gulab, phool, muskan, khobsoorti, dharkana, tarpana etc etc.

The background could be varied depending who the hero of the movie is. I can give you suggestions if you like.

Besides gushup appreciation, perhaps your lyrics can bring you some dough.