~~Aik $@p@n@

****Aik sapana tha jo sapana na raha

Ab kio mera apna na raha

Ab zindagee guzaru mein kasiay

Jab kio dil wala na raha

Aj dil ka bhi dildar na raha

kio ansoo saaf karna wala na raha

Aik shakayat thee jo mujhay rahee

Jab apna kio sahara na raha

Aik sapana tha jo sapana na raha

Ab mujhay kio pyar karnay wala na raha

Kash tum mujhay bhi apna saath leya chaltay rahtay

Tu shahid ab kio afsoos na hota

Ab apni muat ka intezaar raha

Jab kio apna na raha

Aik sapana tha jo sapana na raha

Ab kio zindagee mein na raha!

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Re: ~~Aik $@p@n@

waiting 4 ur comments!:)

Re: ~~Aik $@p@n@

Aajkal konsay sapnay daikhnay lagi ho :bailan:

Re: ~~Aik $@p@n@

aray bhi sapana dhekhna mana hai kia

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sapna daikhna mana naheen hay magar achchay sapnay daikha karo na :flower1:

Re: ~~Aik $@p@n@

Very nice… Mashallah :flower1:

Re: ~~Aik $@p@n@

ayandah se achay hee dekhhoo gee theek hai:blush:

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thanks GS

Re: ~~Aik $@p@n@

I was wondering if $@p@n@, in symbols, is supposed to attach some special meanings to it or it was merely a test of eyes? Apart from this, quite a nice poem :k:…thanx for sharing with us :slight_smile:

Re: ~~Aik $@p@n@

theek hay :flower1:

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thanks Amal 4 ur kind compliment well it is a test of eyes indeed but there is something special abt it like there was a dreams aik sapana khawab jo ab toot gaya kyun ka kio apna na raha . it expalians some tragic incidents but anyways i wrote it in words abt the feelings of some1 for some1 when their hearts are broken so… hope u got it

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:dhimpak:

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Don’t make noise:nono:…i am going to sleep now:sleep:

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but i will make noise:D :2guns:
but u sleep jee:yawn:

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^how can i sleep when u make noise ji :bummer:

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oh u can jee by wearing head phones je:elmo:
then i can make noise easily jeeee:D
:kaboom:

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U r Too much ji ..i don’t wanna sleep ji :snooty:

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wooooooooooooooow thats gr8 very gr8 jeeeeeeeeee:)
ALLAH tusa no khush rakhay jeeeeeee

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^( Aameen summa Aameen )

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hooon soo jao jee