aik nazm kho gaye hai

Gemini_the_Great · March 3, 2002, 9:17pm

***aik nazm kho gaye hai
duniya ki wosato’on main
kuch lafz is ke gum hain
neelay samandaron main
kuch harf mit gaye hain
mo’sam ki barishon main
is ka koi kinaya
badlon ne le liya hai
hanso’n ki dhajh main is ka
ahang kho gaya hai
unwa’an, ruftagan ke
khawabon main jagta hai
uljhi hoye hain rahain
main jin pe chal raha hoon
bikhray howay hain manzar
main jin main ghir gaya hoon
is munatshir jahan main
aik nazam dhondhta hoon

by: Sohail Ahmad Khan***

MAREEZ_E_ISHQ · March 3, 2002, 9:22pm

narm aur nazuk lafzo'N kaa haaR hai yeh nazm.
buhat khub.
thanks for sharin

**bhaRhe* chalo ke tajasus kaa naam iimaa'N hai*

speed_master · March 4, 2002, 5:19am

Nice....

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_kashish · March 4, 2002, 6:01am

bohat pyari nazm hai! GTG thanx for sharing

ASA · March 4, 2002, 1:06pm

nice GtG

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Koi to ho jo mere wehshatooN ka saathe ho

Amal · March 5, 2002, 12:23am

Waaaao…GTG…this is beautiful

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

chand_chehra · March 5, 2002, 12:53am

very nice

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thanks for sharing

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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Rameesha · March 5, 2002, 6:11pm

buhat khoob GTG....

jasmeen · March 6, 2002, 2:38am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Gemini the Great:
*****aik nazm kho gaye hai
duniya ki wosato’on main
kuch lafz is ke gum hain
neelay samandaron main
kuch harf mit gaye hain
mo’sam ki barishon main
is ka koi kinaya
badlon ne le liya hai
hanso’n ki dhajh main is ka
ahang kho gaya hai
unwa’an, ruftagan ke
khawabon main jagta hai
uljhi hoye hain rahain
main jin pe chal raha hoon
bikhray howay hain manzar
main jin main ghir gaya hoon
is munatshir jahan main
aik nazam dhondhta hoon

ZABER10 GEMIMI BOHT KHOBSORAT NAZAM HAY
VERY NICE

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lafzoon ko itamad ka lahja bhi chahey
zikrey saher baja hay yaqeeney saher bhi chahaey

NikamiJano · March 10, 2002, 2:17am

Gtg Beautiful

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~