Aik Nazm Aik Tasweer

He Loves me Not..

**wo ek phool tum ne
jo mujh ko diya tha
mohabbat ki khushboo main bheega hua tha
aur ulfat kay rungoN main dooba hua tha
meray paas aaker,
meray kaan main phir
mujhay yaad hay tum nay jo kuch kaha tha

Mujhay yaad hay,
mujh say tum nay kaha tha
keh us phool kay rung nikhray na hotay
parinday kaheeN bhi chehaktay na hotay
fazaa-oN main khushboo mehkti na hoti
saba saahiloN per lehakti na hoti
sitaaray falak per chamaktay na hotay
keh main jo na hoti,
to tum bhi na hotay

qasam khaa kay us phool ki tum nay mujh say
mohabbat nibhaanay ka waada kiya tha

Wahi phool, jis ki qasam khaa rahay thay
wo phool aik arsay say sookha hua hay
kitaab-e-mohabbat main rakha hua hay
maiN sookhi hui pattiyoN ko musalsal
takay jaa rahi hooN,
takay jaa rahi hooN
wo sookhi hui pattiyaaN bhi to mujh say
kahay jaa rahi haiN,
kahay jaa rahi haiN

TumhaiN mujh say itni mohabat nahi thi
keh jitni mohabbat ka daawa kiya tha**

ShabeMah Ahmed

Buhat Khoob :k:

thats really beautiful :k:


TumhaiN mujh say itni mohabat nahi thi keh jitni mohabbat ka daawa kiya tha
vola.. really nice.. :kaboom:

Wonderful shabemah!

**SuperGlue, Hacker and Sunny,

Thanks so much but Glue u r not supposed to shoot me for that "was I wrong" :)**

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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
Wonderful shabemah!
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Lamhay ( I love that movie :) ) thanks so much..

na mate..
i wasn't shooting u
that kaboom was that poem in my heart.....

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*Originally posted by Shabemah: *

Lamhay ( I love that movie :) ) thanks so much..
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me 2 love that movie yaar superb ;)

Nice contribution !!! Keep it up !

apnay zakhmo ko zamany say chpa ker rona
meri adat hay diay ghar kay bujha kar rona

wo milay bhi to usay haal na kehna apna
sirf murjhaey huay phool dikha kar rona

ab yahi rooz ka mamool bana rakha hay
naam likhna tera aur likh ker mita ker rona

arif g ap yahan pey :) khair takecare

bohat zabar10

:) very nice

bhut achay:k:

:nono: :teary1: why did u do that, it took me a while to write it and u shoot it dead :teary2:

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*Originally posted by arifnawaz: *
Nice contribution !!! Keep it up !

apnay zakhmo ko zamany say chpa ker rona
meri adat hay diay ghar kay bujha kar rona

wo milay bhi to usay haal na kehna apna
sirf murjhaey huay phool dikha kar rona

ab yahi rooz ka mamool bana rakha hay
naam likhna tera aur likh ker mita ker rona
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Woww pahley tu thankyou so much that u liked it, next agar ye apkey apney shair hain tu zabardast khas taur pe

ab yahi rooz ka mamool bana rakha hay
naam likhna tera aur likh ker mita ker rona

thanks so very much..

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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
arif g ap yahan pey :) khair takecare
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:D kiya ye senior member ho key Gosha Nasheen ho gaiye :D

**Dania, Niki, Jan lewaa,

Buhut shukria key ap ko ye nazm achi lagi Inshallah aik aur juld hazir-e-khidmat ho gi..

shukria**

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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *

me 2 love that movie yaar superb ;)
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Rajhistan chalen kiya khiyal hai? I love that part of the movie...

very nice sis :k:
keep up the good work :flower1: