aik nazar shaam k bad

[ghazel_rizvi]

ake nazar shaam k bad

tu nay dekha hey kabhe ake nazar shaam key bad
kitnay chup chap say ligtay heen shajar shaam key bad

itnay chup chap key rasta bhe rahey ga la ilm
chor jaien gay kisi roz nager shaam key bad

may nay asy he gunha tery judaye maien kiya
jasey tofan may koi chor day gher shaam kay bad

shaam say phley woh mast apni orannon may raha
jis key hatoon mey they totay howay per shaam key bad

raat bete tu ginay ablay aur pher socha
kon tha bayas_e_safar sham key bad

tu hey soraj kahan maloom raat ka dukh
tu kisi roz mery gher may oter sham key bad

lot key aye na kisi roz woh awara mizaj
khool rakhtay heen isi ass per daar shaam key bad

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

how it my ghazal tell me

[Golden_Scorpion_1]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

Its Really zabardast…

Very Nice… Tnx for Sharing …

[saroo]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

@ghazel rizvi

ake nazar shaam k bad

itnay chup chap key rasta bhe rahey ga la ilm
chor jaien gay kisi roz nager shaam key bad

tu hey soraj kahan maloom raat ka dukh
tu kisi roz mery gher may oter sham key bad

GR thanks thanks thanks…i had this in my previous collection which a friend borrowed and never returned this is one of my fav’s …thanks

[koiDost]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

Bahut Khoob Ghazal Sahiba kafi acchii choice hai aap kii waise khair tu hai na itni Udas Udas kyun rahnay lagin hain aap aaj kal ?

[Precious_Khan]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

buhat khoob lagta hay kissi SHAA'IR ki shaagirdi ikhtiyar kar li hay aapnay...buhat achchay thanx for sharing

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

@Golden Scorpion

Its Really zabardast…

Very Nice… Tnx for Sharing …

thanx to like it GS:blush:

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

@Precious^Khan

buhat khoob lagta hay kissi SHAA’IR ki shaagirdi ikhtiyar kar li hay aapnay…buhat achchay thanx for sharing

no lala bus asy he thori thori shari likhe hey thanks to like

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

@koiDost

Bahut Khoob Ghazal Sahiba kafi acchii choice hai aap kii waise khair tu hai na itni Udas Udas kyun rahnay lagin hain aap aaj kal ?

i m not udas thanks to like it

[Lamhay]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

nice choice GR! thanks 4 sharing

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

@saroo

GR thanks thanks thanks…i had this in my previous collection which a friend borrowed and never returned this is one of my fav’s …thanks

thanks to like it saroo

[paki123]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

lot key aye na kisi roz woh awara mizaj
khool rakhtay heen isi ass per daar shaam key bad<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

NICE.................KEEP IT UP

[Faithful]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

very nice :D

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

@paki123

lot key aye na kisi roz woh awara mizaj
khool rakhtay heen isi ass per daar shaam key bad

NICE…KEEP IT UP

ji hm jantay heen unkay mizaj pher bhe deer khula rakha hey well i also like it paki:flower2:

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

@Faithful

very nice

thanks ff dear to like it but konsa acha hey zayada shair like to know

[Faithful]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

@ghazel rizvi

ake nazar shaam k bad

tu nay dekha hey kabhe ake nazar shaam key bad
kitnay chup chap say ligtay heen shajar shaam key bad

tu hey soraj kahan maloom raat ka dukh
tu kisi roz mery gher may oter sham key bad

lot key aye na kisi roz woh awara mizaj
khool rakhtay heen isi ass per daar shaam key bad

well this whole gazal is beautiful but these three vreses are ma most fav

[Lovely_Me]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

bhuhut achay bhi

[Lovely_Me]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

beautiful gazel ghazel rizve keep it up!:)

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

thanks lovely to like it

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: aik nazar shaam k bad

Nice ghazal ...ghazal :)