**Hawa ja kar usay kahna
ju iss ne phool bahjay thay
inhii phoolooN se ab khushboo nahi aati
bus uss ki yaad aati hai
isii ki yaad main ab hum
na jeety haiN na martey haiN
bus iss ki aag maiN har waqat jaltey hian
badan se jo lipat kar
rooh tak ko jalati hai
magar uss ko khabar hai kia
jis ki yaad main
tanha sulagtey haiN
ye jo khud ko jalatey haiN
usay kia yaad atey haiN
bata kuch tu
hamein wo yaad kartey hain
ke jis ka naam hum aksar
sar-e-sahil likhtey haiN
jis k vasal ki khatiR
samandaR ki hawaoN ke sabhi dukh jhela kartey haiN
iss say kahna
hum uss ko yaad kartey haiN
ye ankheiN uss ki furqat maiN
hamin ab khon rulati haiN
stati haiN
hum uss ki yaad se dil ko bohat abadd rakhtey haiN
hum uss ke loat anaY ka
yaqeen rakhtey haiN
uss ko yaad kartey haiN
usay kahna !
hum uss se payar kartey haiN
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nicee
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thanx sunny
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Beautifu poem mahamkhan... Bohat hi achi hey :) Thanx for sharing it with us.
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Thanx a lot Amal....mera intikhab pasnad karney ka.....
lagta hai aur kisi ko pasand hi nayi aayi....
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Buhat khoob Maham, waqei poem buhat achi hey aur aapka intikhaab humesha acha hota hey:-)
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Buhat khoob Maham, waqei poem buhat achi hey aur aapka intikhaab humesha acha hota hey:-)
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Thanx a lot Gul,intikhab pasnad karney ka aur hosla afzayi karney ka :)
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Wah,, bohat khoob..
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ver nice poem ,,, thanks for sharing it
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Very nice
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Wah,, bohat khoob..
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Thanx Eemaan
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ver nice poem ,,, thanks for sharing it
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thanx for liking it.....Jhuki nigahein
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Very nice
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Thanx Capricorn
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touching!
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Thanx.........Jhanjharewali
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Bohat khoob janab........:)
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*very nice Maham hamaisha ki tarha intahab acha hai aap ki nazam ki yeh sentence "samandaR ki hawaoN ke sabhi dukh jhela kartey haiN" par kar mujai parveen shahkir ki ghazal ka yeh misra yad aya "Kamal-e-zabt ko khud bhi to azmaon gi" *
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Bohat khoob janab........:)
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Thanks Kaleem gee
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*very nice Maham hamaisha ki tarha intahab acha hai aap ki nazam ki yeh sentence "samandaR ki hawaoN ke sabhi dukh jhela kartey haiN" par kar mujai parveen shahkir ki ghazal ka yeh misra yad aya "Kamal-e-zabt ko khud bhi to azmaon gi" *
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Buhat shukriya.....Sashak gee....mera intikhab pasand karney ka aur hosal afzayii ka