Aik Nazam, Almiya

Shahana · March 1, 2006, 6:03am

Almiya

Shab
Sitaroon ki rida ordhay howaye
Shabnami hont liye
Meri palkon pe jhuki hai jab bhi

Sehr
Khursheed ba-kaf
Aatisheen kirnoon ke jaltay howay nezay le kar
Meri aankhon ki taraf
Bardhnay lagi!

Shan.

ASA · March 1, 2006, 10:04am

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

mashAllah … kya kehney … very nice… :k:

Capricorn · March 1, 2006, 1:25pm

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

:k:

OMG · March 1, 2006, 3:13pm

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

Coool..:k:

Amal · March 1, 2006, 3:56pm

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

Well, it IS an Almiya. Now let me think how to comment on it… Should not I admit that I am mesmerized by the sheer authority whereby you have narreted it in such a flawless way? Yes, I AM mesmerized!

Shahana · March 2, 2006, 4:19am

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

Oh thanks Amal for your kind words.and thanx all of you for your coments.This was the one of my poems published in monthly Takhleeq some years ago,now i want to share with you.

Dilsay · March 3, 2006, 1:40am

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

Is kay baray main aab kiya kahain... Khamooshi he achi hai koyoon ka lafz nahi hain

Zamil · March 8, 2006, 3:15am

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

Pyari hai. Raat aankhon mein kat jaane ko barre lateef andaaz mein bayaan kia hai aap ne. I like it.

HeArT_HaCKeR · March 9, 2006, 8:48am

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

aala … :k:

darwesh · March 16, 2006, 2:38am

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

Shahana ji..... khushbash,
Kiya khoob almiya hai....
Saher Hone Ko Hai Mahoul Banaye Rakhye !

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 16, 2006, 3:51am

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

:k:

Shahana · March 16, 2006, 11:17am

Re: Aik Nazam, Almiya

Thanks all for the appreciation.