Aik Naya Dhaaga

being_lonely · January 24, 2008, 2:56am

Asalam u Alaikum !
How are you all ? Hope fine shine ! Aik nazam aik digest se copy kar raha hon yahan !

Tum Agar Saath Raho

Itnay Lambay Na Hon Din
Itni Bari Raat Na Ho
Ranj Duniya Ke Na Hon
Koi Gham e Zaat Na Ho
Dil Ke Aangan Mein Kabhi
Baarish e Sadmaat Na Ho
Tum Agar Saath Raho

Zeest Jungle Ki Tarah
Itni Bayabaan Na Lagay
Apna Saaya Bhi Hamein
Khud Se Guraizaan Na Lage
Ye Bhara Shehar Hamein
Itna Bhi Veraan Na Lagay
Tum Agar Saath Raho

Aaisay Palkein Na Hon Tar
Aankh Pur Nam Na Rahe
Dil Ki Duniya Mein Kabhi
Dukh Ka Mosam Na Rahe
Koi Andoh Na Ho
Koi Gham, Gham Na Ho
Agar Tum Sath Raho

( Usually I dont Share Long Nazams Anyways waisay he zara sa change he sahi )

Being loNEly !!! siD !!!

Dushwari · January 24, 2008, 2:57am

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very nice nazm, being lonely.
bes,
Dushwari

redidentity · January 24, 2008, 4:23am

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very nice :)

bheegiyaad · January 24, 2008, 10:16am

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nice sharing

Shumaisa · January 24, 2008, 12:49pm

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Digest mujhe bhijwa do agar saari copy karr li hon tou..
Maira din acha guzar jaye ga..

P.S: Nice.. :k:

hiba_no.1 · January 24, 2008, 1:21pm

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nice

muncho · January 24, 2008, 1:35pm

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very nice g

Dania · January 24, 2008, 6:05pm

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NOT BAD :)

NikamiJano · January 24, 2008, 8:11pm

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Aaisay Palkein Na Hon Tar
Aankh Pur Nam Na Rahe
Dil Ki Duniya Mein Kabhi
Dukh Ka Mosam Na Rahe
Koi Andoh Na Ho
Koi Gham, Gham Na Ho
Agar Tum Sath Raho
nice sharing lonley :)

_MuNiYa · January 24, 2008, 9:08pm

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Nice.

m.a.d.i.h.a · January 24, 2008, 9:17pm

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very nice
i really like it

Jhanjharewali · January 24, 2008, 10:52pm

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u shud upload a part of it in ur voice here. im sure its beauty will double

sunny_nicky · January 26, 2008, 2:26pm

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nice b l :)

babri · January 26, 2008, 2:36pm

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BL bro maine bohat samja aaj une k agar wo sath rehen to ye sab nahi ho magar wo mahne hi nahi aur chale gay:(
ajeeb ajeeb batein karte rehe bohat samja BL bro aur app ko b ye poem abi post karni thi?
khair its so cool.

being_lonely · January 27, 2008, 4:13am

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Thanks everyone aap sab ki mohabbaton ka shukriya !

being_lonely · January 27, 2008, 4:15am

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7* Bhai himmat se kaam lein axis of rotation k rule ko zehan mein rakha karein zameen suraj se duur aur paass hoti rehti hai iska ye matlab nahi ke woh usay chor de gi ! so khush rahiye sab behtar ho jaye ga !