Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Naraaz ho kyun JaanaN
Main ne tau yahi poochha tha
k ab k baras tum kis se
pyaar nibhaao gay
Kis k liye chaahat ki
Har hadd se guzar jaao gay 
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
bohaaat khoob, kya masoom harjai hai or kaisa masoom sawal hai, subhan allah
thx 4 sharing
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Main Qurban Iss Masomieat Kay ...... short and buhat he khubsurat nazam ..... it seems u are doing poetry fron long times ...... thx for sharing and keep it up ......
Nah Janay Keon Yah She'r Kahnay Ko Dil Kar Raha Hay ...
*Hum Hain Roh-e-Safar, Hameen Namoon Say Nah Pahchaan
Kal Aur Kissi Naam Say Chalay Aain Gay Hum Loog *
Chalta hoon ....
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Bohot shukria Rani aur Sannan.
Maasoomiat tau uss ki such much aisee hii hai Aap ne uss ko daikha nahin hai na.
Aur Sannan Ji, it isn’t been a long time since I have started writing. aap ko hum main kis ki shabaahat dikhaee daitee hai? 
Thanks for the nice comments:)
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
lolzzzzzzzz sanan, aaap ko hamesha hi aik sher yaad a jata hai , q akhir q akhir kiunnnnnnnnnnnn
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Phir uss nay kya jawaab diyaa Sahaab:-)?
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Uss k jawab hi se tau nazm ka aghaz huwa tha Gul-e-Tasbeeh Ji. kuch naraz hii huwa tha Woh hai na k:
Khush aaye tujhay shehr-e-munaafiq kii ameeri
Hum logoN ko such kehnay kii aadat bhee bohat thii
Wasay btw, I know I’m not good at writing Azaad Nazm:blush:
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
I will beg to differ because I understand that you are too good at it. As I had said earlier, bohat saarey lafzoN meiN to koi bhi apni baat keh sakta hey, asal baat hey bohat thorrey sey lafzoN meiN apni baat keh di jaey, it takes something to be able to do this. Thanx a lot for sharing this beautiful piece with us, Sahaab Is baar naam sahi hey na :~)
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Well as Amal said Chand lafzoN mein muda’a bayaan kar dena har kisi kay bas ki baat nahi, Aap nay intehai masoom nazm likhi hay, i realy like it, keep it up girl ,hope to see more from your work Sahaab…
PS: Narazgi tou chalo theekh hay i was asking uss nay kya jawab diya iss baras wuh apni muhabat kis sey nibhaey ga… hopefully uss nay ussi ka naam liya hoga 
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Bohat shukria Amal. Jitnay khoobsoorat alfaz mein aap ne meri hosla-afzaee kii hai, ab ki baar tau ghalat naam k saath bhee guzara ho jata 
Bohat niwazish Gul-e-Tasbeeh Ji. I’ll love to share my thoughts with the Saahib-e-zoq people of this forum
JahaN tak USS ki baat hai, tau naam jaan’nay ka shoq bhalaa kiss ko tha? Yeh tau ab aap kii baat sunn kar soch rahee hooN k uss ne kiss ka naam liya tha 
I think I’ll have to take the risk of asking him again 
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Boht khoob Sahab 
keep it up. …
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
waisay harjai sahab masoom lagtay toh nahi hain poem parhnay k baad…bas title mein hi masoom hain…
neways gr8 poem…keep it up…:k:
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
**Phir Youn Howa Kah Rastay Yakja Naheen Rahay
Woh Bhi Ana Parast Tha Aur Main Bhi Ana Parast **
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Bohat shukria HeArT HaCKeR aur Muslim girl
Muslim Girl Ji:
MaiN aisay shakhs kii maasoomiat pe kya likhoon
Jo mujh ko apnii khataaoN meiN bhee bhala hii laga
Hona tau yahii chahiye tha Sannan Ji, lakin Uss ne kaha tha k:
Yeh daikh tujh se wafaa kii k bai-wafaee kii
MaiN aur kahiN mubtalaa raha, so raha
Therefore, I’m still thinking
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Meray Khyal Main aap parveen Shakir Kay iss She’r pay yaqeen rakhti hain …
**Woh Kaheen Bhi Gya Lota To Meray He Pas Hay
Bus Yahi Baat Achi Hay Meray Harjai Key **
Chalta Houn
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
***Kabhi byth kr bhi bat kr liy akro aram sy:) ***
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Naraaz ho kyun JaanaN Main ne tau yahi poochha tha k ab k baras tum kis se pyaar nibhaao gay Kis k liye chaahat ki Har hadd se guzar jaao gay :)
**khub Shaab:) **
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
**Upan Kay Pass baithnay kay Time Nae aay Ray **
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
wah jee wah...........
mera tu ye kehnay ka dil cha raha hai
*** mai nay jhaila hay galay mil k bichernay ka azab***
meray mabood kisi ko ye saza mat daina
Re: Aik maasoom harjaaee k liye
Sannan je bat bat per rothna SINF E NAZUK ki ada hai…
bhool janay ka hosla na hua
door reh kr bhi wo juda na hua
tujh say milker kisi say kia miltay
koi tujh jaisa dosra na hua