Aik Larki!!

shoaib_akhter · November 30, 2004, 3:07pm

Aik Larki Par Dil Ayaa,
Us ko dil ki har dharkan mei basaya
Phir Us nay Bohat Sataya,
Wada karke bhi Gair Banaya,
Yeh Pyar Nahin Hai, Us nay Bataya,
Wo Keh Kay Hum ko Bohat Rulaya, Bohat Rulaya…

by
(Me) Farman

Golden_Scorpion_1 · December 1, 2004, 5:15am

Re: Aik Larki!!

Wah… Its Very Nice .. Keep it Up Shobi Dear :k:

Dynamic_fire · December 1, 2004, 2:09pm

nice:flower1:

shoaib_akhter · December 2, 2004, 3:18pm

thanks GS n Df

HAMMAD · December 2, 2004, 6:29pm

dheeee hader :k:
jeoo mayre share

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 3, 2004, 12:44am

very nice :k: .. keep up .. waitin for another one

cuteepie · December 3, 2004, 6:22am

very nice :k:

Nayab · December 3, 2004, 9:44am

Ohhh

shoaib_akhter · December 4, 2004, 5:26am

thanks everyone!! :-)

Ghazaloo i am writing another one, but its not soundin the way i want it to sound!! i gotta fix some stuff init!!

Errors_Found · December 11, 2004, 3:30pm

Wah Farman sahab…kiya farmaya hay yaar too nay!!! Keep it up. :k:

shoaib_akhter · December 13, 2004, 8:45pm

shukreya Error found!!

DADDU · December 14, 2004, 4:42pm

Nice

Dil lagane ki kia zaroorat thi
aazmaane ki kia zaroorat thi
umer bhar tum ko pardh gaya rona
muskurane ki kia zaroorat thi.

shoaib_akhter · December 14, 2004, 10:14pm

wah janaab.. bohat khoob!! :k:

KaHaNi · December 15, 2004, 4:53am

paki_kurri_1 · December 15, 2004, 11:26pm

nice... wese whos the larki:p

Lamhay · December 23, 2004, 3:31pm

Re: Aik Larki!!

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by shoaib akhter: *
*Aik Larki Par Dil Ayaa,
Us ko dil ki har dharkan mei basaya
Phir Us nay Bohat Sataya,
Wada karke bhi Gair Banaya,
Yeh Pyar Nahin Hai, Us nay Bataya,
Wo Keh Kay Hum ko Bohat Rulaya, Bohat Rulaya......

by
(Me) Farman
[/QUOTE]

:) so cute !

waisay nana shoaib tum nanay munnay say hokar itni bari batain ...
bahut khoob koshish keep it up and thanks 4 sharing brother !

usman_636 · December 24, 2004, 10:46pm

very good!!

pardesi_kuri · December 25, 2004, 4:24am

:k:

shoaib_akhter · December 28, 2004, 6:15am

hai aik us ko yaad kar kay ansoo aa jatay hain

shoaib_akhter · December 28, 2004, 6:17am

Re: Re: Aik Larki!!

thanks lamhay

main nana munna hoon naa ishe liye wo larki nay dokha diya … shayad saamajh he nahin pae anyway, shukriya pasand karnay ka :k: