Aik Khayaal

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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MAY AGAR MAY NAHEE HOTA , TOA AUR KIA HOTA

AGAR AIK PHOOL JO HOTA TOA MEHAKTA REHTA
OORH KAY RuNG, MAY TUJH PAY LUTA-TA KHUSHBOOOOO

MAY AGAR MAY NAHEE HOTA, TOA PHIR HOTA ANSOOOO

GHUM KEE SHIDDAT MAIN TERI ANKHON SAY BEHNAY LAGTA
MERA BEHNA TERI TANHAEE MAIN MUKHIL HOTA
TUU HATHAYELEE PAY MUJHAY RAKH K KUCH SOCHA KERTEE
KALAA-YON SAY RAGAR K MUJHAY PONCHA KERTEE
AUR MAIN TERI ADAA-ON PAY FANA HO JATA

MAY AGAR MAY NAHEE HOTA, TOA PHIR HOTA BADAL

TERI JANIB KABHEE SURAJ KO NA TAK-NAY DETA
TU JO HOTEE KABHEE MUGHMOOM GHUM-E-DUNYA SAY
MAY TERAY AIK ISHAARAY PER BARASNAY LAGTA
GURD KEE SARAEE TAHAIN DHUL K NIKHER C JATEE
TUU NIKHER JATEE, AUR MAUSAM KHUD HEE HUSNAY LAGTA

MAY AGAR MAY NAHEE HOTA, TOA PHIR HOTA KHUSHBOOO

TEREE SAANSOO-N , TERAY BAALON, TERAY MULBOOS MAY GUM
MAY GUL KO CHOR K TUJH MAIN HEE BASAY-RA KERTA
TERI HER SAANS MAY HOTA MERA CHURCHA HUM DUM

MAY AGAR MAY NAHEE HOTA, TOA SITARA HOTA

MAY FALAK PER BHEEE TERAY HUSAN KA CHURCHA KERTA
CHAAND KO JUB BHEE TERAY HUSSAN SAY HOTEE JO JALAN
MAY TIM-TIMA KAY TUJHAY ISS KEE BHEE KHABAR DETA
YEH KHABAR SUN kay JUB TUU KHIL-KHILA KAY HUNS PERTEE
MAY TERAY QUD-MON may REHNAY KEE AARZOO KERTA

MAY AGAR MAY NAHEE HOTA, TOA AUR KIA HOTA

wriiten by:show sha

plz do give ur comments n suggestions

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** show_sha **,

I must say "IT IS A GOOD WORK ". Bahot hii achhi soNch hai..achha likha hai aap ne...dheroN daad kubul kijiye aur likhte rahiye..hameiN sunnate rahiye.......
Thanks for sharing...........

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thnx pramod........for the only response......thnx a lot
God bless ya

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MAY AGAR MAY NAHEE HOTA, TOA PHIR HOTA BADAL

TERI JANIB KABHEE SURAJ KO NA TAK-NAY DETA
TU JO HOTEE KABHEE MUGHMOOM GHUM-E-DUNYA SAY
MAY TERAY AIK ISHAARAY PER BARASNAY LAGTA
GURD KEE SARAEE TAHAIN DHUL K NIKHER C JATEE
TUU NIKHER JATEE, AUR MAUSAM KHUD HEE HUSNAY LAGTA

:smiley: this is so nice. Welcome to our forum :flower1:

I guess I am not in a postion to comment on your qafia bandi or for that matter any other technicality with respect to your piece posted above. I can do that but I ain’t no real shair. So would wait for the real macho poets of this forum to post their sincere comments on that beautifuly written work of yours.

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:k:

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thxxxxxxx for appriciation........ADAB ARZ HAYy

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I like the poem its pretty good and beautiful.Not that i understand how you can write stuff like that.I myself hate writing poems.:k: :flower1: :kiss: :hug:

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thnx RH