hope friendz u r gona like it!!!
its ma first romantic poem:blush:
http://www.hallagulla.com/urdu/photo/data/500/Ak_khwaishh.jpg
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
maza nahi aya
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
maza nahi aya
:)
koi baat nahi...
better luck next time!!!!
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
aww it's lovely :)
aur ameen ;)
Re: Aik Khaahish…
Short, yet very sweet poem.. 
mujhe aik nazm yaad agai..
“Meri Bus Itni Khuahish Hai
Kuch Aisay Pehchani Jaon
Aap Ke Naam Se Jaani Jaon”
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
no. he gets to keep his name
that is how it has always been.
sonia_jee,
how dare you ask his name to join yours! :>
well, nice poem.
best,
Dushwari
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
:) koi baat nahi... better luck next time!!!!
aam si adhori khwahish walay log
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
aam si adhori khwahish walay log
app tehray baray log janab..................humaree tou aam see khahishain hotee hain:@:
app chand ko chonay ki khahsih karain..............hamaray liay ye he khahish bohat hai:)
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
*simply awesom .... short & impressive ...... i always like short poems .... a very cool image just like i used to write for my poems already posted in Shore'e gup shup many months ago ..... anyway keep it up .... *
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
*simply awesom .... short & impressive ...... i always like short poems .... a very cool image just like i used to write for my poems already posted in Shore'e gup shup many months ago ..... anyway keep it up .... *
Pasand karnay ka shukriya Sannan :@:
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
aww it's lovely :)
aur ameen ;)
Hayee Thank u Siso:)
Re: Aik Khaahish…
thanks alot Bro:)
ye walee poem bohat awesome hai:@:
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
hm Achii hai.. :)
Re: Aik Khaahish…
thank u Shumaisa:)
Re: Aik Khaahish…
Thankk u Ali Bhai:@:
Re: Aik Khaahish…
nice short but sweet :k:
Re: Aik Khaahish…
** sorry i 4got to ask … Did you prepare image by yourself 
??? **
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
app tehray baray log janab..................humaree tou aam see khahishain hotee hain:@: app chand ko chonay ki khahsih karain..............hamaray liay ye he khahish bohat hai:)
toba aap ka sun kar to sabzi wala bhi aap ke mohallay se nahi guzray ga.
Re: Aik Khaahish.......................
toba aap ka sun kar to sabzi wala bhi aap ke mohallay se nahi guzray ga.
ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOLD UR TOUNGE!