Aik Ghazal

Innocent_Smile · March 17, 2011, 10:45pm

**gham e ishq, gham e hayat se barh ke to nai
ke teri baat, meri zaat se barh ke to nai

wo keh gaya ke judaai hi thi muqadar apna
goya mera saath rivayaat se barh ke to nai

tere janay ke baad ehsaas hoa aay jaan e wafa
visal ka lamha, hijar ke tajurbaat se barh ke to nai

be-yaqeeni ki fiza hai taari is qadar mujh pe
ke wafa ki baat hikayat se barh ke to nai**

P.S…main ne kisi bhi forum pe apni koi ghazal pehli bar share ki hai. umeed hai ap sab ko pasand aaye gi.
agar na bhi aaye to tareef lazmi karni hai:emmy:

IS · March 18, 2011, 6:07am

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Matlab in any case tareef e karni parhe gi

PS: Nice try IS-Z

ehsan · March 18, 2011, 6:49am

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Aap liktee bhi hain.

Nice. :k:

IS · March 18, 2011, 7:12am

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nai typing ki hy IS-z ne

ehsan · March 18, 2011, 7:36am

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Amal · March 18, 2011, 7:46am

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Bohat achi koshish hey IS k: … mazeed likhney sey mazeed nikhaar aaey ga…likhti rahiye aur share karti rahiye

Shazia_Arif · March 18, 2011, 8:13am

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dhamki..haeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee main dar gai
frankly speaking mujhe bohat achi lagi…isi tara likhain gi to inshallah perfect ho jain gi:)

Innocent_Smile · March 18, 2011, 10:15am

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jee bilkul agar tareef na karty to

Thanks

likhna parta hai…exam mein main ne Time Value of Money wala case nai likha tha…marks bhi nai milay…

Thank you

Innocent_Smile · March 18, 2011, 10:17am

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Thank you Amal…
theek hai likhti rahon mere koan sa paisy lagty hain likhny main

aik to ap dar boht jaldi jati hai

Thank you jee

waleedhbk · March 18, 2011, 10:32am

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Nice :)

Innocent_Smile · March 18, 2011, 10:37am

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Thanks Waleed :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · March 18, 2011, 2:31pm

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sab tareef kar rehe hain to nice hi ho gi

Innocent_Smile · March 18, 2011, 4:15pm

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theek se tareef karo

jiia · March 19, 2011, 1:19pm

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INNO likhte rahna bohat acha likte ho:lajawab:

Innocent_Smile · March 19, 2011, 2:02pm

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thanks dear

Sannan · March 24, 2011, 6:16am

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Shukar karo forum par share key hay kissi stage par naheen key warnah saray ganday aanday aur tamatar kay bag bhar ka aap lay jati