aik fil badeeh shair

Mirch · February 3, 2009, 10:03pm

na poch dil key tanha-e ka alam aay dost
woh sath tha phir bhee tanha thay hum.

comments ? Criticism ?

ASA · February 4, 2009, 8:28pm

Re: aik fil badeeh shair

**nice :k:

this remind me of a shair..

faasly aisy bhe hongy ye kabhi socha na tha,
saamne baitha tha mery aur woh mera na tha**

muncho · February 4, 2009, 10:40pm

Re: aik fil badeeh shair

achee kawish g

being_lonely · February 5, 2009, 12:35pm

Re: aik fil badeeh shair

Nice Try Mirch :k:

Mirch · February 5, 2009, 5:35pm

Thanks

Subhan Allah.

Shukria.

prince4uonly · February 9, 2009, 8:02am

Re: aik fil badeeh shair

zindaa-dilaan-e-shah’r ko kyaa ho gayaa “Faraz”
aankheN bujhii bujhii haiN to chehre mare mare

Mirch · February 16, 2009, 7:07pm

Two more filbadeah Ashaar:

dukh itnaly jhailay hum nay k
put jhar bhee bahar lagtee hay abb tow

Dhokay yaroon nay itnay dee-a
k jhoot he such laganay laga humain.

diwana · February 17, 2009, 4:09am

Re: aik fil badeeh shair

^ I think it will connect two misray together if you say;

Sach bhi Jhoot Lagnay Lagay Hum Ko

Ya

Dhokay yaron ne diye Itnay Hum ko
Sach bhi Jhoot Lagnay Lagay Ab to

Jihadi · February 17, 2009, 4:53pm

Re: aik fil badeeh shair

pretty good

Mirch · February 26, 2009, 2:44pm

makes lots of sense. I hereby appoint you official shair o Shairi tutor of ma ba dolat. Manzoor hay ?

Jihadi · March 1, 2009, 2:58pm

Re: aik fil badeeh shair

Hmmmmmm