Aik din achanak

tahreem_saeed · March 22, 2007, 5:08pm

aik din achanak he
phone aa gya us ka
lehjay ki malamat se
ho raha tha sub zahir
ro rahi thi shidat se
larkharatay lafzon se
kar rahi thi batain wo
tum kahan thay itnay din?
roz phone kerti thi
baat tum se kerni hai
jo bohat zaroori hai
khush nahin hon main bhi kuch
pyar tera thukra ker
sara din tarrapti hon
chain he nahi milta
jagti hon shub bher main
neend he nahi aati
jo nahi kaha kal tak
aaj tum se kehti hoon
pyar tum se kerti hon
main nay phir kaha us se
main na kehta tha tum se
aik din tou aana hai
lot ker tumhain wapis
kaisay tum bina mere
zindagi guzaro gi
zinda tou raho gi per
zindagi na ho gi wo
aik aik lemhay mein
yaad meri aaye gi
doosri taraf se phir
qehqeha sa aaya ik
aur wo lagi kehnay
tum bhi kitnay pagal ho
jantay nahi itna
aaj ‘first april’ hai

SJ · March 22, 2007, 5:10pm

Re: Aik din achanak

oh!
its amazing poem!!!!
bohat khoob!
magar Tahreem abhi tu 1st april mein bohat din baqi hain!:)

tahreem_saeed · March 22, 2007, 5:14pm

Re: Aik din achanak

haan soniaa yeh baat tow hai per mujhey achi lagi tow send kardi intezaar na ho saka april kaa i hope u all like this

SJ · March 22, 2007, 5:21pm

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its simply amazing!
bohat achee poem hai......
who is the poet of this poem Tahreem?

being_lonely · March 22, 2007, 5:25pm

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tahreem_saeed:

aik din achanak he phone aa gya us ka lehjay ki malamat se ho raha tha sub zahir ro rahi thi shidat se larkharatay lafzon se kar rahi thi batain wo tum kahan thay itnay din? roz phone kerti thi baat tum se kerni hai jo bohat zaroori hai khush nahin hon main bhi kuch pyar tera thukra ker sara din tarrapti hon chain he nahi milta jagti hon shub bher main neend he nahi aati jo nahi kaha kal tak aaj tum se kehti hoon pyar tum se kerti hon main nay phir kaha us se main na kehta tha tum se aik din tou aana hai lot ker tumhain wapis kaisay tum bina mere zindagi guzaro gi zinda tou raho gi per zindagi na ho gi wo aik aik lemhay mein yaad meri aaye gi doosri taraf se phir qehqeha sa aaya ik aur wo lagi kehnay tum bhi kitnay pagal ho jantay nahi itna aaj 'first april' hai

mei ne bhi share ki thi yeh nazm means i like it
mujhe wasi shah zehar lagta hai but parhnay walay parhtay hain usko so
wasi ki aik nazm jawaban hazir hai !

kal hamesha ki tarah uss nay kaha yeh fone par
main buhat masrof hon mujh ko buhat say kaam hain
iss lye tum ao milnay main to asakte nahi
har riwayat torr kar iss bar main nay keh dya
tum jo ho masrof to main bhe buhat masrof hon
tum jo mashoor to me bhe buhat maroof hon
tum agar ghamgeen ho me bhi buhat ranjoor hon
tum thakan say choor ho to main bhe thakan say choor hon
jan-e-man hai waqt mera bhi buhat hi qeemti
kuch puranay doston nay milnay ana hai abhi
main bhi ab farig nahi mujh ko bhi lakhon kaam hain
warna kehnay ko to sub lamhay tumharay naam hain
mere ankhain bhe buhat bojhal hain sona hai mujhay
ratjagon k baad ab neendon main khona hai mujhay
main laho apni anaon ka baha sakta nahin
tum nahi ate to milnay main bhi asakta nahi
uss ko yeh keh kar wasi me nay reciever rakh dya
aur phir apni ana k sar pe paaon rakh dya

tahreem_saeed · March 22, 2007, 5:50pm

Re: Aik din achanak

jee mainey yeh perhi hai bohat achi hai wasi acha hai aap ko kyun nahin pasand?

being_lonely · March 22, 2007, 6:09pm

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nehayat he batamiz kisam ka insan hai aur poetry sari chori ki khud ko Illama Iqbal samjhta hai khair choriye us k haami aa jeyn ge mujhe maarnay

pk786 · March 22, 2007, 6:10pm

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dono achi hain :)

Shab-e-Hijar · March 22, 2007, 6:11pm

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Ohh thanks tehreem for posting this ...
it reminds me that my sis bday is comin and and i have to buy a gift for her :-(

mr.muncho · March 22, 2007, 8:39pm

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mr.muncho · March 22, 2007, 8:43pm

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ik hor khurcha

hiba_no.1 · March 23, 2007, 9:28am

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bohut khoob tahreem