Aik Derwaaish................

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

SJ September 13, 2007, 6:57am 1

Aik Darwaaish

Gaey Dinon ki baat hai yaro

Aik Darwaish Mila Tha Mujh ko

Lahja Madham Madham Tha

Bataon Mein Ajab Ik Gham Tha

Uss Nay Kaha Tha …

Dekh Ayy Larki..

Chahat Kay Matwalon Ka

Dunya Mein Sanjoog Nahin

Ishq Na karna Nadaa’n Larki

Ishq Sa Koi Roog Nahin

redidentity September 13, 2007, 7:05am 2

Re: Aik Derwaaish…

ohh God, its very beautiful.. no words..

ishq sa koi rog nahi..

SJ September 13, 2007, 7:06am 3

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Thanks Ahmer:blush:

redidentity September 13, 2007, 7:07am 4

Re: Aik Derwaaish................

hayen.. yaheen bethi hui theen kia :o

nahi no need to say thanx :) its pleasure reading ur stuff.. n pata kia.. sab meray paas aapke naam se saved :$

SJ September 13, 2007, 7:08am 5

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Awww..................
so nice of You!!!

GuL-e-Tasbeeh September 13, 2007, 7:20am 6

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Mashallah, very well written Sonia, Darvaish ney theek hi kaha tha:-)

SJ September 13, 2007, 7:22am 7

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han magar "ishq"par zor nahin:)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh September 13, 2007, 7:25am 8

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:-)

tum_bin_1 September 13, 2007, 2:40pm 9

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Bohat Khoob :k:

Amal September 13, 2007, 4:01pm 10

Re: Aik Derwaaish…

Very nice poem soniaa_jee :k: darwesh ki naseehat ko bohat khoob andaaz meiN bayaan ki hey aap ney :k: … Thanx for sharing it with us

being_lonely September 13, 2007, 4:40pm 11

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Baja Farmaya Sj bohat khoooB likha hai aap ne khush rahiye

mirage September 13, 2007, 7:19pm 12

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Again a simple expression with a lyrical tone. You write truly beautifuly Keep it up :k:

SJ September 19, 2007, 8:30am 13

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Thanks Mirage:bb: