Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

Ai mere ham-nashin chal kahin aur chal is chaman mein ab apna guzara nahin

Baat hoti gulon tak to seh lete hum ab to kaanton pe bhi haq hamara nahin

Aaj aaye ho tum kal chale jaaoge ye muhabbat ko apni gavaara nahin

Umr bhar kaa sahara bano to bano,do ghaddi ka sahara, sahaaraa nahin

De sadaa darr par aur kabhi tuur par kis jagah mainne tum ko pukaraa nahin

Thokarein yuun khilaane se kyaa faida, saaf keh do ke milanaa gavara nahin

Gulastaan ko lahuu ki zaroorat paddi sab se pehle hi gardan hamaari katti

Phir bhi kehte hain mujh se yeh ahal-e-chaman ye chaman hai hamara, tumhara nahin

Zaalimon apni qismat pe naazaan na ho, daur badle ga ye waqt ki baat hai

Woh yaqeenan sunega sadaayen meri, kyaa tumhara Khudaa hai.. hamara nahin .. ?

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

Zaima nice gazal but i think ye intkhaab main jaiey ghi :)

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

my fvrttttttttttt ghazal munni begam ki awaz mein,,,but zamil g ye yahan kya kar rahi hai? is ko kick maren or intikhaaab mein sutten........lolz

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

Woh yaqeenan sunega sadaayen meri, kyaa tumhara Khudaa hai.. hamara nahin .. ?

Very nice............

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

thnx everyone,
Kaleemhk I like that part the most :blush::blush:

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

wow....zeberdestt ghazal :)

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

Nice **
**and welcome to poetry section :-)

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

thankoe :blush:

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

beautiful !!!

thx for sharing :)

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

:k:

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

bohat khoob.

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Ai mere ham-nashin chal kahin aur chal is chaman mein ab apna guzara nahin

Baat hoti gulon tak to seh lete hum ab to kaanton pe bhi haq hamara nahin
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very nice sharing....thanx!

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal

Thnxxx :blush: