Ai mere ham-nashin chal kahin aur chal is chaman mein ab apna guzara nahin
Baat hoti gulon tak to seh lete hum ab to kaanton pe bhi haq hamara nahin
Aaj aaye ho tum kal chale jaaoge ye muhabbat ko apni gavaara nahin
Umr bhar kaa sahara bano to bano,do ghaddi ka sahara, sahaaraa nahin
De sadaa darr par aur kabhi tuur par kis jagah mainne tum ko pukaraa nahin
Thokarein yuun khilaane se kyaa faida, saaf keh do ke milanaa gavara nahin
Gulastaan ko lahuu ki zaroorat paddi sab se pehle hi gardan hamaari katti
Phir bhi kehte hain mujh se yeh ahal-e-chaman ye chaman hai hamara, tumhara nahin
Zaalimon apni qismat pe naazaan na ho, daur badle ga ye waqt ki baat hai
Woh yaqeenan sunega sadaayen meri, kyaa tumhara Khudaa hai.. hamara nahin .. ?
Koyal
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Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal
Zaima nice gazal but i think ye intkhaab main jaiey ghi :)
Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal
my fvrttttttttttt ghazal munni begam ki awaz mein,,,but zamil g ye yahan kya kar rahi hai? is ko kick maren or intikhaaab mein sutten........lolz
Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal
Woh yaqeenan sunega sadaayen meri, kyaa tumhara Khudaa hai.. hamara nahin .. ?
Very nice............
Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal
thnx everyone,
Kaleemhk I like that part the most 

Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal
wow....zeberdestt ghazal :)
IS
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Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal
Nice **
**and welcome to poetry section :-)
Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal
thankoe 
Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal
beautiful !!!
thx for sharing :)
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:k:
Re: Ai mere ham-nashin kahin aur chal
bohat khoob.
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Ai mere ham-nashin chal kahin aur chal is chaman mein ab apna guzara nahin
Baat hoti gulon tak to seh lete hum ab to kaanton pe bhi haq hamara nahin
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very nice sharing....thanx!
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Thnxxx 