*Ahem

kafi arsey kay bad yaha kuch post karney ja rahi hon ummed karti hon shayad ap logo ko pasand aey … kuch meri diary sey :~)
**
Tuj ko dkeha to nahee par mehsoos kia hai
meiN ney zindagi ka safar yoN mukamil kiya hai

Tuj ko kabhi haqeeqat meiN to nahee
par khawabooN meiN zaroor choa hai

Khusbu ki tarha hai tu mery har taraf
halankey teri sansoN ka mujhee ilm nahee hai

ek saya sa hai nigahooN peh
jabkey tuj ko meiN ney dekha nahe hai

tu haqeeqat hai ya koi kahwaab
jo bhi hai par meri ruh meiN shamil hai
**

Nice :k:

nice effort NIYa(Y)..i feel u do have emotions,which is essentail for a god poet..nice effort.keep it up..and do share it again in future:)

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nice effort NIYa(Y)..i feel u do have emotions,which is essentail for a god poet..nice effort.keep it up..and do share it again in future:)
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thanks for your comments :~) but i am surprised you cant even pronounce my name correctly .. well not shocked :D

zaberdast :k:

umm..nice, nia baji did you write it by yourself? :)

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umm..nice, nia baji did you write it by yourself? :)
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its from her diary ms.dumbo of the yr....

nia two thumbs up!!

Re: *Ahem

Very nice nia jee :flower1:

can do better :k: … par koshish buri nahin..jari rakho :slight_smile:

Rab Rakha

DerVaisH

wah wah. zabardast :k:

something I actually understood! Beautiful. :~)

wah re wah…

bohat khoob… :k:

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its from her diary ms.dumbo of the yr....

nia two thumbs up!!
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:p abae chal, apni diary main apna hi likha shair tahreer kerna mana hai?

thanks everyone