Aghaaz Yoonh Hua tha...!!

Lamhay · January 16, 2005, 5:16pm

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Aaghaaz Yoonh Hua tha
Uss nay Ghulaab Bheja
Main nay Kitaab Kholi
Aur Uss main Rakh Diya woh
Sab Say Issay Chupaya!!!
Anjaam Ye hua hai
Kuch Khushk Patiyaan Hain
Thori si hai Mehak bhi
Bas Aur Kuch Nahin…!!!
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Amarbail · January 16, 2005, 5:20pm

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Welcome Back Lamhay

Its really great always to read your collection, which are really marvellous …
This poem is also very beautiful :k::k::k: and thanks for sharing …

m_kamal · January 16, 2005, 9:54pm

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buhut khoob lamhay G..... another good knock

Diva · January 17, 2005, 4:13am

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Its great yaar .Really like your sense of poetry.

Golden_Scorpion_1 · January 17, 2005, 4:58am

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Wonderful.. Very Nice Lamhay …

Here U go… Issay bhi rakh lo Kitaab maiN …

Lamhay · January 17, 2005, 1:29pm

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Zawanfira G ** ...iss tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya**
m kamal Bahut shukriya!
Diva :) Oh really thanks a lot!

Golden scorpion *Shukriya G .. meharbani .. phool aik hi baar rakha jata hai kisi khas shaks ka ;) waisay ye phool tumharay hi planet ka hai aur apni hi planet ki makhlooq ko pesh karoo lolzzzz :D *

Amarbail · January 17, 2005, 8:24pm

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U are always welcome Lamhay … finally u got success … :k:

Shab-e-Hijar · January 17, 2005, 8:28pm

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nice :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 18, 2005, 2:09am

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nice .. :k: ..

and many many happy returns of the day .. .. May you have many many more ..

reet · January 18, 2005, 10:15am

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Aaghaaz Yoonh Hua tha
Uss nay Ghulaab Bheja
Main nay Kitaab Kholi
Aur Uss main Rakh Diya woh
Sab Say Issay Chupaya!!!
Anjaam Ye hua hai
Kuch Khushk Patiyaan Hain
Thori si hai Mehak bhi
Bas Aur Kuch Nahin…!!!

very nice…