Agar tum dohndhna chaho ..

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Agar tum dhondhna chaho tu mein tum ko khizan asar be-saya darakhton mein tum ko milon Jahan shahab say mehroom raton ko khizan aram karti hai, jahan girtay hoye patton kay matam main hawa ka as shamil hay, meri awaz shamil hai Agar tum dhondh na chaho tu mein tum ko kese weran bastii mein kese be abb sehra main shayad milon kay main sehra ke urti rait kay zaroon ka hissa hon koi bholi kahani hon koi purana qisa hon kese din tum jo ay niklo kese weran qarye main kese ayesay kharaby mein jahan koi nahi rehta jahan tareek raton ko Khamoshi chenkh kar apnay makion main.... kahin mheta hoaa dekho kese tanha musafir ko tum phir itna samhaj lena kay.... tum nay paliya mujhe ko AGAR TUM DHONDH NA CHAHO.............. TU........

[Capricorn]

Re: Agar tum dohndhna chaho ..

*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *

Agar tum dhondhna chaho tu mein tum ko khizan asar be-saya darakhton mein tum ko milon Jahan shahab say mehroom raton ko khizan aram karti hai, jahan girtay hoye patton kay matam main hawa ka as shamil hay, meri awaz shamil hai Agar tum dhondh na chaho tu mein tum ko kese weran bastii mein kese be abb sehra main shayad milon kay main sehra ke urti rait kay zaroon ka hissa hon koi bholi kahani hon koi purana qisa hon kese din tum jo ay niklo kese weran qarye main kese ayesay kharaby mein jahan koi nahi rehta jahan tareek raton ko Khamoshi chenkh kar apnay makion main.... kahin mheta hoaa dekho kese tanha musafir ko tum phir itna samhaj lena kay.... tum nay paliya mujhe ko AGAR TUM DHONDH NA CHAHO.............. TU........

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[ASA]

very nice.. GKK… :k:

[Shehenshah]

nice one :k:
but try using a more visible font color

[koiDost]

Bahut Khoob Ghazal

[Sinner]

Nice
but
believe
me
I can't
read after
2 lines

[Azad]

nahi abhi mood nahi hay aglay janum main

[Seedha_Saada]

:k:

[system]

very nice :k:

[cuteepie]

:k:

[reet]

Re: Agar tum dohndhna chaho ..

*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *

Agar tum dhondhna chaho tu mein tum ko khizan asar be-saya darakhton mein tum ko milon Jahan shahab say mehroom raton ko khizan aram karti hai, jahan girtay hoye patton kay matam main hawa ka as shamil hay, meri awaz shamil hai Agar tum dhondh na chaho tu mein tum ko kese weran bastii mein kese be abb sehra main shayad milon kay main sehra ke urti rait kay zaroon ka hissa hon koi bholi kahani hon koi purana qisa hon kese din tum jo ay niklo kese weran qarye main kese ayesay kharaby mein jahan koi nahi rehta jahan tareek raton ko Khamoshi chenkh kar apnay makion main.... kahin mheta hoaa dekho kese tanha musafir ko tum phir itna samhaj lena kay.... tum nay paliya mujhe ko AGAR TUM DHONDH NA CHAHO.............. TU........

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[Dilsay]

Very nice

[Nayab]

Bohot khoob:k:

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Shehenshah and Sinner sorry .. next time mein color ka dehaan rakho gee..

**thanx everyone **

Azad watever:grumpy: ..

[simply_stunning]

bahut khoob !!

[Maheen2002]

Nice

[chand_chehra]

Niceeeeeee :k:

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

thankew everyone:flower1: ..

[nikii]

Re: Agar tum dohndhna chaho ..

*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *

Agar tum dhondhna chaho tu mein tum ko khizan asar be-saya darakhton mein tum ko milon Jahan shahab say mehroom raton ko khizan aram karti hai, jahan girtay hoye patton kay matam main hawa ka as shamil hay, meri awaz shamil hai Agar tum dhondh na chaho tu mein tum ko kese weran bastii mein kese be abb sehra main shayad milon kay main sehra ke urti rait kay zaroon ka hissa hon koi bholi kahani hon koi purana qisa hon **kese din tum jo ay niklo kese weran qarye main kese ayesay kharaby mein jahan koi nahi rehta jahan tareek raton ko Khamoshi chenkh kar apnay makion main.... kahin mheta hoaa dekho kese tanha musafir ko tum phir itna samhaj lena kay.... tum nay paliya mujhe ko AGAR TUM DHONDH NA CHAHO.............. TU........**

Bhut khoob ghazalooo

[Azad]

*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
Shehenshah and Sinner sorry .. next time mein color ka dehaan rakho gee..

**thanx everyone **

Azad watever:grumpy: ..

acha chalain ziyada mayoos na hon .. koshish karain ho saka hay iss janum main bhi kuch ho jay.