AEK...QATA,A...

S.786 · June 15, 2008, 10:30am

luog behis hu k bhi zinda rahy…

hamko maaraa shiddat-e-ehsaas ny

yaas luogon ko sukoon puhnchaagai..

hamko bekal kardiyaa hy yaas nay…

(s.naz)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 16, 2008, 10:24am

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uss k baad kya huwa ?

immu · June 16, 2008, 11:26am

Sufaid jhoot############

redidentity · June 16, 2008, 12:29pm

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nice.. :)

abeeha · June 16, 2008, 5:32pm

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its nice

chacha_Ghalib · June 16, 2008, 11:45pm

doosra shair theek hai laiken pehlay pai aik aitraaz warid hota hai

agar ehsaas mout ka sabab hai to zahir hai be-hiss ho kay hi insaan zinda reh sakta hai to phir ye kehna kay wo be-hiss **ho kay bhi **zinda rahy koi nuqta-e-aitraz nahin... haan agar aik hi shai ka asar dou ashkhaas per mukhtalif ho to baat banti hai jaisy kay doosray shair main yaas istemaal hova hai

hope you won't mind it... it is my habit that i tell people when i think something is not fitting properly and i also expect others to do the same when i post stuff :)

S.786 · June 17, 2008, 8:06am

thanks 4 cumnts...

,,hamko mara shiddat-e-ehsas ny,, se muraad wo muot nahin ju dunya se lyjaay.....balky ehsas ki shiddat nidhal kardeti hy.phir bhi zinda tu hen.

lekin luog behisi k bawjod ussi beparwaai sy zinda rehty hen....thanks

S.786 · June 17, 2008, 8:09am

immu.........kheryat ??????????

thanks to aal

immu · June 17, 2008, 11:36am

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G nahi,,,

muncho · June 17, 2008, 8:36pm

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nice g

Shab-e-Hijar · June 17, 2008, 11:11pm

Nice s sis keep it up

S.786 · June 18, 2008, 7:53am

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thanks shab mancho pa