Aek aur puraani ghazal :~)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal December 20, 2006, 12:41pm 1

Here is another from my diary. Posted long time ago on this forum. Just happened to see it again and thought to share with you guys — again :~)

**Hasad ki panaahoN meiN jaga dhooNdtey heiN log
notoN ki gaddiyoN meiN panaah dhooNdtey heiN log

sharm-o-haya ki maey inhey taskeen nahi deti
biktey huwey jismoN meiN nasha dhooNdtey heiN log

hawas ka tan-e-bar’hana chupaaney ke leeye aksar
mohabbat ki dil’fareib qabaa dhooNdtey heiN log

haathoN ki lakeeroN meiN bas yuNhi ulajh kar
apni apni qismat ka sira dhooNdtey heiN log

apney gharoN meiN rishtoN ka chahey sakooN na ho
auroN ki zindagi meiN khalaa dhooNdtey heiN log

footh-paath par beitthey huwey totoN ki madad sey
roothi hui khushiyoN ka pataa dhooNdtey heiN log

diloN ki imaaratoN meiN kaheiN bandagi nahi
eeNtoN ki masjidoN meiN khuda dhooNdtey heiN log

By: Amal
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GuL-e-Tasbeeh December 20, 2006, 1:40pm 2

Re: Aek aur puraani ghazal :~)

Buhat khoob likha hey Amal, Thanks for sharing again this beautiful Poem:-)

ded9211 December 23, 2006, 4:25am 3

Re: Aek aur puraani ghazal :~)

**footh-paath par beitthey huwey totoN ki madad sey
roothi hui khushiyoN ka pataa dhooNdtey heiN log

diloN ki imaaratoN meiN kaheiN bandagi nahi
eeNtoN ki masjidoN meiN khuda dhooNdtey heiN log**
WOW great!

AQ December 23, 2006, 4:39am 4

Re: Aek aur puraani ghazal :~)

reminds me of these two ashaars:

Jub bhee chaahaiN ik nayee soorat banaa laitaY haiN loug
Ik chehraY pe kai chehraY sajaa laitaY haiN loug

Iss jahaaN maiN kab kissi kaa dard apnaataY haiN loug
Rukh hawaa kaa dekh kar aksar badal jaataY haiN loug

waisaY, lafz “tota” ToyeN saY ghalat-ul-aam maiN aa gaya hai.. asal lafz “taY” saY hai.. aur yeh baat Hakeem Saeed aur Masood Ahmed Barakaati Hamdard NaunehaaL maiN baRaY shadd-o-madd saY kehtaY rahai haiN

Jhuki_Nigahein December 23, 2006, 4:57am 5

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buhat khoob

I_am_in_Love December 24, 2006, 12:11am 6

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sach kaha nonehal sab ne nahi prha meri or ap ki trha:(

Amal December 25, 2006, 11:46am 7

Re: Aek aur puraani ghazal :~)

Thanx for liking it guys :)

system December 25, 2006, 2:19pm 8

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Very true.. Achi ghazal hai Amal.. :-)

Shab-e-Hijar December 25, 2006, 6:57pm 9

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diloN ki imaaratoN meiN kaheiN bandagi nahi eeNtoN ki masjidoN meiN khuda dhooNdtey heiN log

By: Amal

very nice :k:

lovehugs January 23, 2007, 11:11am 10

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Dilon ki imartoon mein kahin bandgi naheen
Eintoon ki masjidon mein Khuda dhondtay hain log.

Exceeeeeeeeeeeeelenttt couplet

Aceones January 27, 2007, 7:49am 11

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:) beautiful work amal saab