Aeitbar kar ke chout khaa chuke hain

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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“Mehfil-e-ghazal mein sab ko adaab”

Ek khoobsurat kavish ap sab ki nazar is umeed per ke ap sab ko bahut pasand ayegi, hope aap sab mujhe apne comments se nawazenge.

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Aeitbaar kar ke chout kha chuke hain
Apne zabt ko bahut aazmaa chuke hain
Khud ko takleef huwi tu ehsaas huwa
Kitne teer dosroo per chala chuke hain
Mere dukh ki daastan woh sun kar bolay
Aap yeh qissa pehle bhi suna chuke hain
Kal jo meri zaat ka hawaala thay
Aaj mera naam tak bhula chuke hain
Ay tabeeb-e-dil, bari dair kar diiii
Aap ke mareez jaan se ja chuke hain**

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Wah Janab... bouhat khubsurat... umeed hai aap ayse hi humain aapne zoak se nawazti rahain gii.

:)

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nice one bholi and welcome here..:)

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Very nice....

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Bhooli :k:

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wow..
coooll

Aeitbaar kar ke chout kha chuke hain
Apne zabt ko bahut aazmaa chuke hain

kinne kiya sii aitbaar kro

Khud ko takleef huwi tu ehsaas huwa
Kitne teer dosroo per chala chuke hain

kaash ye pehle socha hota..chalo dair aayad durust aayad

Mere dukh ki daastan woh sun kar bolay
Aap yeh qissa pehle bhi suna chuke hain
Kal jo meri zaat ka hawaala thay
Aaj mera naam tak bhula chuke hain

oo hooo bare afsoos kii baat hai waqai

Ay tabeeb-e-dil, bari dair kar diiii
Aap ke mareez jaan se ja chuke hain

chalo gal ii muq gai..qissa hi khatam.

well nice.keep it up.

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:halo:

:rolleyes: :rolleyes:

Bhooli Bisri

:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

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:k: nice one :slight_smile:

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bohat khoob, :k:

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Nice 1 :k:
and welcome to gupshup :slight_smile:

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nice1:k::k:
welcome:)

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bohut khoob, thanks for sharing n keep it up :k:

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buhat khoob :k:

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Re: Aeitbar kar ke chout khaa chuke hain

WAH :k:

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Re: Aeitbar kar ke chout khaa chuke hain

Bohat khoob Bhooli Bisiri:k:…bohat
acha andaaz hey:k:…thanx for sharing:)