Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

LP · June 21, 2012, 12:28pm

Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao
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Khab maiN dekh chuka huN mujhe taa’beer dikhaao** **
Khaahisho!! AaNkh se bahti hui hasrat na bano**
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Waqt badla hai to badli hui tasveer dikhaao** **
Raasto!! Mere liye manzileN aasaaN kardo** **
Tum mere zer E Qadam rahne ki tauqeer dikhaao** **
Waahimo!! Hadd E yaqeeN pe mujhe hairaaN na karo** **
Arsaa E shak se guzar jaane ki tadbeer dikhaao** **
Hauslo!! Jang ki haalat ko badal kar dekho** **
MaiN sipar dekh chuka huN mujhe shamsheer dikhaao** **
Zaaviyo!! Husn E lab O chasm nahi hai kaafi**
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Qaid karne ke liye duusri zanjeer dikhaao** **
Faaslo!! Qurb ke lamhoN me yeh doori kaisi** **
Yahi hoga to mujhe safha E taqdeer dikhaao** **
Faislo!! Baar E virasat hai mere shaanoN par** **
Jis ka haQdaar huN mujh ko wohi jaageer dikhaao** **
RaunaQo!! ‘Azm’ ki aaNkhoN me chamakne k liye** **
Is bayaabaaN meN kisi shahr ki taameer dikhaao**

enter10 · June 21, 2012, 1:00pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

Bohat Khoob…:k:

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2012, 4:59pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

:k:

ye nazm padh ke safaid chai kiyun yaad aa rahi hai

LP · June 21, 2012, 5:02pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

Thanks

chai kubse safaid hooney lagi

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2012, 5:10pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

Chai nahin ChaRi.. bole to stick

LP · June 21, 2012, 5:11pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

but you said chai

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2012, 5:16pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

R type hone se reh gaya… iski maafi nahin milegi kia?

LP · June 21, 2012, 5:17pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

aaj kaafi violent mood mai hoon…koe maafi nahi mileygi

jurmana/jurbana pay kerna pareyga

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2012, 5:23pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

Ye jurbana kia hota hai.. maine konse Arabs ke oont bhagae hai jo jurmana doon?

LP · June 21, 2012, 5:26pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

you make chari into chai isiliye

waisey wht is safaid chari ?

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2012, 5:30pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

Safaid ChaRi is used by blind people. The nazm repeats ‘dikhao… dikhao’ Thats why that ChaRi came to my mind

LP · June 21, 2012, 5:32pm

Re: Ae iraado!!! Mujhe takmeel ki taaseer dikhaao

oh ok