LP
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Adhoora choor diyaa
khuch loog bohot khush qismat they
Jo ishq ko kaam samajhtey they
Ya Kaam say aashqi kertey they.
hum jeetay jee masroof rehey
na ishq kiyaa na kaam kiyaa.
kam ishq key aarey aata raha
Ishq kaam say youn takrata raha.
keh akhir hum ney tang aa ker
doonon ko adhoora choor diyaa..
Amal
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Re: adhoora choor diyaa...
Bohat achi nazm hey...always nice to read :)
LP
3
Re: adhoora choor diyaa...
u hv read it pehley:(
Amal
4
Re: adhoora choor diyaa…
ye poem idhar har haftey post hoti hey
… aap ney nahi parrhi? 
LP
7
Re: adhoora choor diyaa…
pakar ke achar dalna tha kya:emmy:
ehsan
11
Re: adhoora choor diyaa…
Kabhi koi kaam poora nahin kiya. 
LP
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Re: adhoora choor diyaa…
:no: adhoora he theek hai

Re: adhoora choor diyaa...
Agree with Amal, this poem is always nice to read.
Re: adhoora choor diyaa…
achi hai nazam…lekin kaam adhora chorna achi baat nai hoti 