adhoora choor diyaa...

Adhoora choor diyaa

khuch loog bohot khush qismat they
Jo ishq ko kaam samajhtey they
Ya Kaam say aashqi kertey they.

hum jeetay jee masroof rehey
na ishq kiyaa na kaam kiyaa.
kam ishq key aarey aata raha
Ishq kaam say youn takrata raha.

keh akhir hum ney tang aa ker
doonon ko adhoora choor diyaa..

Re: adhoora choor diyaa...

Bohat achi nazm hey...always nice to read :)

Re: adhoora choor diyaa...

u hv read it pehley:(

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

ye poem idhar har haftey post hoti hey :cb: … aap ney nahi parrhi? :bummer:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

:no:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

To nhe chorna tha na :omg:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

pakar ke achar dalna tha kya:emmy:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

To daal lena tha na :emmy:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

Lovely sharing LP … :k:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

:no: i dotn liek achar

thanks arif bhai:hat:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

Kabhi koi kaam poora nahin kiya. :emmy:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

**Bht khoob LP
**

:omg:

agreeeeeeeee :smiley:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

:no: adhoora he theek hai

:emmy:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa...

Agree with Amal, this poem is always nice to read.

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

Buhat acha kia :cobra:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

:hmmm:

:smack2: kyon jeeee

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

achi hai nazam…lekin kaam adhora chorna achi baat nai hoti :emmy:

Re: adhoora choor diyaa…

Kia hova?