ADDA EEY DILRUBAI

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Gassoo sanwartaay haain woo ayenaa dekh karr
Aur yeah bhee dekhtaay haain koi dekhtaa naa ho

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**Zindgee eek chaman haay chamn haa magar **
Iss chaman kee bahar o khizan kuch naheen
woo naa ayeen too samjho khizan kaay hain din
woo goo ayeen too samjho bahar aa gayee

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Gassoo sanwartaay haain woo ayenaa dekh karr
Aur yeah bhee dekhtaay haain koi dekhtaa naa ho

Aaye haye haye Khalid Sir ! kya baat hai aap ki cha gaye bhaeeeee :-)

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The exact sheir goes like this:

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Chup chup ke khud ko aaeyney meiN deikhtey heiN wo
aur ye bhi deikhtey heiN koi deikhta na ho
**

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Thanks for correction...

Khalid

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{{Gassoo sanwartaay haain woo ayenaa dekh karr
Aur yeah bhee dekhtaay haain koi dekhtaa naa ho}}

kia shair hi khalid bhai tusi set ja rahay ho lagay raho meharbani shre karan di:)

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:k:

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**zabardast Khalid bhai zabardast.Dad dainay main kanjosi to nahi kar rahi hon na. Amal bhai ap nay bhe khoob kaha…kafi mozoon hay apka kha huwa sheir…kh …chup chup k khud ko ainay main dekhtay hain wo …

** donon hi khobsoorat hain.:):):):)
[never mind my roman urdu]:blush:…:smiley:

which guppy u would take with u
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Shahana ye sheir na to mera hey aur na Khalid sahab ka. Khalid sahab ney shaed ghalati sey is section meiN post kar dia isey :)

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No Amal , it is not posted my mistake . They were good Shar and I shared it here. when I write my OWN poetry I always Give my NAME and DATE on which written...... and by the way .. I guess your Shar is either a mistake or wrongly written > The Ghazal is sung by Asif Ali . please listen to it and correct ur collection..... :) No hard feelings...

Khalid

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Thanks Shahana . for liking good poetry .. I confirm that these are not my own poetry .. but I liked them and wished to share it with "ahal eey zooq" :) Like u , Amal and many more here ..................who have good knowlege and taste for poetry .. :)

Khalid

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Anything that does not belong to us, goes to Intikhaab. Do you agree? That’s why I said that you posted it here by mistake. I clearly mentioned word section. Shahana seemed to have assumed that the sheir was yours and I made a different version. I cleared the confusion. That’s it :slight_smile:

I read it in a book and put it here without any change. It is possible that it might have been altered for singing purpose.

Definitely not sir :slight_smile:

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oh Isee ...............its ok...waiting for yours own.

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Sorry Shahana I was sick therefore I did not come on the forum for many days. I will now be regularly coming over.. InshaAllah

Khalid

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