Achha Lagta Hai

***Tere bare men sochte rehna achha lagta he
pal pal khayalon men khhote rehna acha lagta he

teri deed to ab shaid mere muqadar men na ho magar
sapne men tera akas banate rehna acha lagta he

dil to kahen chain hi nai pata he tere bin jana
yun din rat isay behlate rehna acha lagta he

teri judai kaise seh pahon ga, aksar sochta rehta hun
aur bar-ha yun soch men doobte rehna acha lagta he

khawabon men mere jo kabhi aa jate ho tum
din charhe tak phir sotey rehna acha lagta he


Re: Achha Lagta Hai

nice poetry

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thanx jee

Re: Achha Lagta Hai

nice one...:)

Re: Achha Lagta Hai

very good TN

Re: Achha Lagta Hai

v hapy 2 c u here,1st time u posted sumthin here, nai?ur poem is simply awesom.

Re: Achha Lagta Hai

Bohat shukria ap sab ki hosla afzai ka...

Re: Achha Lagta Hai

Bohat hi acha likha aap ne Tere_Naam…:k:

Re: Achha Lagta Hai

Thank you Aryan bhai ap jaisa to nai but koshish ki he kuch likhne ki.

Re: Achha Lagta Hai

acha lagta he....

hum ey bhi aapki post padhna bahut achha laga........

Re: Achha Lagta Hai

achha jee