achey shairoo'N ki parakh tum nay hi sikhlaai mujhey..Dedicate to Amal:)

NikamiJano · July 1, 2007, 10:42pm

** ** naqsh ki tarha ubhaRna bhi tum hi se seekha rafta rafta nazaR aana bhi tum hi se seekha

tum se hasil howa ik gehRey samandeR ka sokoot
aur har mouj se laRna bhi tum hi se seekha

achey shairoo’N ki parakh tum nay hi sikhlaai mujhey
apney undaaz se kehna bhi tum hi se seekha

tum nay samjhaay meRi soch k aadab_e adab
lafz_o mani se ulajhna bhi tum hi sey seekha

rishta_e naaz ko jana bhi tu tum se jana
jama_e fakh’r pehen’na bhi tum hi se seekha

choti si baat pe khush hona mujhe aata tha
per baRi baat pe chup rehna tum hi se seekha

deep_ocean · July 2, 2007, 4:01am

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**

** Amazing

Jhanjharewali · July 2, 2007, 5:54am

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its so very beautiful! sach mei Amal inna kamaal rakhtein hein?? :D

deadsoul · July 2, 2007, 8:00am

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buhat khob
thx for sharing

amal deserves it

redidentity · July 2, 2007, 9:31am

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Really Superb..

tahreem_saeed · July 2, 2007, 9:43am

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wow thats gr8 wah Amal jee aap to gr8 ho

NikamiJano · July 2, 2007, 12:18pm

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itna nahi JW bohat kamal rakhtey ...UN ka tu naam he Kamal Ahmed hona chaiey tha :p

Amal · July 2, 2007, 12:49pm

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NikamiJi so nice of you Though you said just too much about me, phir bhi is dedication ke leeye be’had shukriya

Amal · July 2, 2007, 12:51pm

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This is lovely NikamiJi k:

NikamiJano · July 2, 2007, 1:11pm

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not REally Aymal..insaan bohat kuch aik dosrey se seekhta hia and jab seekhay tu one shud appreciate hai na

NikamiJano · July 2, 2007, 1:16pm

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thanks wesay agar ghor se parehin tu sari tareefain nahi hia kuch

meraforum · July 2, 2007, 3:37pm

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amazing

NikamiJano · July 3, 2007, 1:42pm

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Waqie se :p

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 3, 2007, 1:43pm

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buhat khoob Nikami ji, last time aap ney jo poem dedicate ki thi Amal ko wuh zeyada achi thi, achi ye bhi hey par iss meiN giley shikwey zeyada heiN:p

Aqls · July 3, 2007, 1:46pm

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bohat hi umdaah

NikamiJano · July 3, 2007, 3:40pm

Re: achey shairoo'N ki parakh tum nay hi sikhlaai mujhey..Dedicate to Amal:)

wohi tu peR heR aik ko ye baat samj nahi ati na LOG tareef samj laiety :p..wesay b gilay shikway k begaier ;)

Shab-e-Hijar · July 3, 2007, 5:43pm

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hain itna kuch sekh liya aur mujhay pata hi nahi chala

NikamiJano · July 4, 2007, 2:53am

Re: achey shairoo’N ki parakh tum nay hi sikhlaai mujhey..Dedicate to Amal:)

ap apnay hujray se bahaR niqalaiN tu ap ko pata chalay k dunya main kia nahi ho raha